Barbaros
Could somebody correct my business latters l am rather apology to lose contact with you . we might have good business relation with you also it might be great to work a experiance gentelman in the territory but unfortunatly . l could not contact with you due to could not meet your demand . Now we moved our factory from 4.000 m2 area to 15.000 m2 closed area . Everything will be better after short period time we will be ready for meet your demand on the thailand confectionary market . if you let me l will make you know regarding what we have new and fit with your market from price to display and taste Whether you work with us or not l always appreciated you and your people they all was so kind and hospitable
Oct 27, 2014 2:52 PM
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Could somebody correct my business letters?

l am sorry to have lost contact with you. We might have developed a good business relationship with you. It would have been great to work with an experienced businessman. But unfortunately, any contact would have been unjustified as I was unable to meet your demand. Now we have moved our factory from a 4.000 m2 site to a 15.000 m2 one.
Everything will be better: after a short period of time we will be ready to meet your demand on the Thailand confectionary (tekstil ve tatlılar?) market. If you like, I will inform you about what we have new that fits your market in terms of price, display and taste.

Whether you work with us or not, l have always appreciated you and your people. They were all so kind and hospitable.

Tekrar yazdım.

 

 

November 1, 2014
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