Natural Conscience. Actually, there are a lot of people with a natural conscience. I not have anything against this ideology. Sometimes It's good think about the planet where we live, but How much peo

José Alberto

Natural Conscience. Actually, there are a lot of people with a natural conscience. I not have anything against this ideology. Sometimes It's good think about the planet where we live, but How much people could change for safe the planet? A planet with more people will be a place with little resources, fewer places to life. To remedy this natural decline (natural or human decline, what is it better word?), we need to change some commodities in our life. I don't know, maybe fewer cars, hot water in winter, cold water in spring or meat in the food. Things (resources) that the planet need. How many people could change this commodities? Gracias por leerme. Saludos

Oct 31, 2014 5:29 AM

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Natural Conscience.

Actually, There are actually a lot of people with a natural conscience. I not dont have anything against this ideology. Sometimes it's good to think about the planet where that we live on, but how much many people could have to change for to safe save the planet? A planet with more people will be a place with little less resources, and fewer places to life live.

To remedy this natural decline in resources (natural decline sounds better) (natural or human decline, which is a it better word?), we need to change some commodities in our life. I don't know, maybe fewer cars, usage of hot water in winter and cold water in spring or meat in the food. Things (resources) that the planet needs. How many people could change this these commodities?

Gracias por leerme.
Saludos

October 31, 2014

José,

I'm not sure I understood everything you were trying to say, but here is an attempt at rewording your text. As usual, you English is good.

Natural Conscience.

Environmental Awareness

Actually, there are a lot of people with a natural conscience.

Nowadyas there are a lot of people who are environmentally aware.

(En inglés <em>actualmente</em> = nowadays)

I do not have anything against this ideology. Sometimes it's good to think about the planet where we live, but how much can people could change for safe to save (<em>salvar</em>) the planet? A planet with more people will be a place with little few resources, fewer places to life.

(few = contable; little = no contable)

To remedy this natural environmental decline (natural or human decline, what is it better word?), we need to change some commodities conveniences in our life. I don't know for sure, but maybe we should use fewer cars, less hot water in winter, less cold water in spring or less meat in the food. These are things (resources) that the planet needs. How many people could would be able to give up change these conveniences ?

(commodities = a raw materials or primary agricultural products that can be bought and sold, such as copper or coffee)

(conveniences = things that contribute to an easy and effortless way of life.)

Gracias por leerme.
Saludos

November 2, 2014

Hi Maria, Sound bad that. In Mexico it's same. Thanks for read the topic. Have a good day.

October 31, 2014

Hi Saj, for moment I didn't know what word I could use, maybe conscience or Ideology but you're reason, it's better conscience. Thanks. Que bueno que te agrado el tema.

October 31, 2014

Hello Jose Alberto, I think about it daily,in my region the drought is being a problem,but many people only look at sky and think how nice is the weather 27 celsius degree in October... They live in the nine cloud and I suffer with the shortage of water two sides of the same reality.

October 31, 2014

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