万圣节快乐{happy halloween}

万圣节虽然不是中国传统节日， 大家却很开心， 因为可能会收到糖果！我收到了一条围巾和棒棒糖~真好！
{ Even though Halloween is not a Chinese traditional festival，everyone is in a celebratory mood happy [虽然翻譯沒錯, 但英文不会用这样来对这節日表示快乐, 聖誕節要用 "merry" 而新年, 生日要用 "happy"]，because someone we may get many presents [你中文是糖果]candy! I received [語气大沉重了] got a scarf and some candy/sweets lollipops~ sweet [也是英国英文的糖果的意思所以有些不清而美式英文会帶些讥笑的意味] It was great！}希望大家帮我修改

万圣节快乐{happy halloween}

万圣节虽然不是中国传统节日， 大家却很开心， 因为可能会收到糖果！我收到了一条围巾和棒棒糖~真好！
{ Even though Halloween is not a traditional Chinese festival,everyone is still really happy about it because they might get lots of candies ! I received a scarf and some lollipops~sweet！}希望大家帮我修改