Ji Hee
Today My speaking getting worse T.T help me... In the morning time, I was talking with boss about hiring advertising. He wanted me to upload the advertising instead of him. I am just Part time server here, though. Because our restaurant main customer(almost all) is Korean, But my boss is not Korean, and He can't speak Korean even a word. He needs my help... I: I am trying to upload the advertising right now. Boss: What? You didn't you upload it? I: I was really tired yesterday, I just slept when I was at home.(Does it make sense?) Boss: Okay, Go ahead. I: I think it's better that I don't mention your restaurant name on this post. Boss: Why? I: Because I already uploaded this advertising one weeks ago. This site is pretty famous for during(?) Korean. If It uploads pretty many time(?: In my English, I couldn't explain this..), It might be bad influence(effect) on the restaurant reputation. They thought weird(strange )why the advertising keep posting, They might think this restaurant have something bad for employer. Boss: But many big restaurant always keep uploading hiring advertising. I want to this restaunt be more famouse. I: Yes, I think you're right.
Oct 31, 2014 8:15 PM
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Today My speaking getting worse T.T help me...

In the morning time, I was talking with boss about hiring advertising.
He wanted me to upload the advertising instead of him. I am just Part time server here, though.
Because our restaurant main customer(almost all) is Korean, But my boss is not Korean, and He can't speak Korean even a word. He needs my help...

I: I am trying to upload the advertisement right now.
Boss: What? You didn't you upload it?
I: I was really tired yesterday, I just slept when I was at home.(Does it make sense? yes)

More natural: "I was really tired yesterday so I went straight to bed when I got home."
Boss: Okay, Go ahead.
I: I think it's better that I don't mention your restaurant name on this post. Perfect!
Boss: Why?
I: Because I already uploaded this advertisement one weeks ago. This site is pretty famous for during(?) Koreans.
If It uploads pretty many time a lot(?: In my English, I couldn't explain this..), It might be bad influence(effect) on for the restaurant's reputation. Your sentence was easy to understand though.

They thought weird(strange )why the advertising keep posting, They might think this restaurant have something bad for employer.

If a Korean person sees a hiring advertisement too much, he might get the wrong impression of the restaurant. He might think that the employer can't keep a full staff because it is not a good place to work.

Boss: But many big restaurants are always keep uploading hiring advertisements.
I want to this restaurant to be more famouse.

I: Yes, I think you're right.

 

I think your boss might not understand Korean culture. In the United States, it is common to see hiring advertiesments over and over again. Try to explain that it is a culture difference.

October 31, 2014
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