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My dream I have a dream:It is learn English well.When I was little,I had many dreams,but in the end did not choose it.I want to be a translator after grow up,because I think that the translator is the most clever,so I decided to Study hard English,move on to my dream!
Nov 1, 2014 2:06 AM
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My dream

I have a dream: It is to learn English well.  When I was little, I had many dreams, but in the end did not choose it follow them [1].  I want to be a translator after I have grown up, because I think that the a translator is the most clever person, so I decided to Sstudy hard in English, to move on to my dream!

 

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[1] In English, we say that we "follow our dreams".

 

When writing English, add a space (' ') after every comma (',') and full-stop ('.').

Good luck with your dream!

November 1, 2014
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