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My day Today was a family day because I went with my mom, grand father and my father in law at a restaurant and we ate delicious mexican food :D After that we went to grand father´s home and left him there. At night, my mom and I buy food and we had our breakfast in grand mother´s home with her and my uncle. When I arrived at home, I only feed to my pets and talked with a friend a couple hours. Tomorrow I will have classes of English at 8:00 am, so I have to wake up early :s Greetings! :)
Nov 1, 2014 6:31 AM
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     <em>I spent the day with my </em>family. <em>First; </em>my <em>mother</em>, grandfather, father in-law, <em>and I</em> ate delicious <em>Mexican</em> food at a restaurant. <em>Then we brought my grandfather </em>home. <em>Later;</em> my mom and I <em>bought</em> food and <em>had dinner at my grandmother's</em> home with her and my uncle. <em>When I finally got</em> home, I <em>fed</em> my pets and talked with a friend <em>for </em>a couple <em>of </em>hours.
     I have <em>English </em>classes at <em>eight o'clock</em> <em>tomorrow morning</em>, so I have to wake up early. 

<em>     Acabo de cambiar las palabras para hacer esta lectura de forma más natural. Buen trabajo.</em>

November 1, 2014
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My day

Today was a family day because I went with my mom, grandfather and my father-in-law to a restaurant, and we ate delicious mexican food :D
After that we went to my grandfather´s home and left him there.
At night, my mom and I bought food, and we had our breakfast [Breakfast is what we eat in the morning. Perhaps you mean "dinner" or "supper"?] in my grandmother´s home with her and my uncle.
When I arrived at home, I only fed my pets and talked with a friend for a couple hours.
Tomorrow I will have English class at 8:00 am, so I have to wake up early :s
Greetings! :)

 

Greetings!

November 1, 2014
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