wendy
Music plays an important role in my daily life. After working for over 8 hours, I usually go back home with a bad emotion. In that case, I like listening to some music to relax while cooking dinner. In fact, the music I like is not a certain kind, I like the old songs which I liked to sing many years ago. I enjoy the songs in the kitchen and sing aloud without caring about my children. The better thing is that the dinner I cooked while listening to music is tastier than usual. My children also like listening to music for relaxing after doing homework, which can help them keep a good emotion the next day. I often taking about music with others, all of us think that the world language is neither English nor chinese, it's definitely music. Maybe sometimes we don't know what the lyrics say, but everyone can be attracted by the amazing tunes. I think that I can lose my interest in anything except fantasticmusic and tasty food, because thewy never let me feel disappointed once!
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Music plays an important role /part in my daily life. After working for over 8 hours, I usually go back home in a bad mood /with a bad emotion. In that case, I like listening to (some) music to relax while cooking dinner. In fact, the music I like is not a certain /particular kind. I like the old songs which I *liked /used to sing many years ago. I enjoy listening to songs in the kitchen, and sing aloud without caring about my children. The better /Another thing /Even better is that the dinner I cook while listening to music tastes *better is tastier than usual. My children also like listening to music to relax /for relaxing after doing homework, which can help them [keep a good emotion] /feel in a good mood the next day. I often talk about music with other people, and all of us /we all think that the world language is neither English nor Chinese - it's definitely music. Maybe sometimes we don't know what the lyrics say /understand the lyrics, but everyone can be attracted by the amazing tunes. I think that I can lose my interest in anything except fantastic /great music and tasty /good food, because these never let me down (or feel disappointed even once!)
*avoid repetition of 'like' and 'better' Music and food make everyday life more enjoyable and help us forget the stress.
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Music plays an important role in my daily life. After working for over 8 hours, I usually commute back home with a bad mood. In that case, I like listening to some music to relax while cooking dinner. In fact, I don’t necessarily like one specific kind of music, I like the old songs which I enjoyed to sing many years ago. I enjoy singing my favorite songs aloud in the kitchen without caring about my children. The better thing is that the dinner I cooked while listening to music is tastier than usual. My children also like listening to music for relaxing after doing their homework which can help them keep a good mood the next day. I often talk about music with others, all of us agree that the world language is neither English nor Chinese, it's definitely music. We sometimes don’t understand what the lyrics say, but we often enjoy catchy tunes. I think that I can lose my interest in anything except fantastic music and tasty food, because they’ve never disappointed me!
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