I went to practice karate today. I'm more tired because it's been two weeks. It's already getting hot in the gym. It was cold until recently. I feel the seasons change quickly.

kkjun

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I went to practice karate today. I'm more tired because it's been two weeks. It's already getting hot in the gym, which was cold until recently. I feel the seasons changing quickly.

Hi Kkjun! It’s great that you’re practicing karate and staying active. You did a good job describing how tired you feel after two weeks and noticing the temperature change in the gym. For improvement, try connecting your thoughts with more details for clarity. Keep up the hard work!

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I went to practice karate today. I'm more tired because it's been two weeks since the last time I practiced. It's already getting hot in the gym even though it was cold until recently. I feel the seasons are quickly changing.

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