My mother said it’s !???not good to not go out, especially during the day time, because we need sunshine. I told her that perhaps we should become tourists for a day. I searched online and discovered that the former residence of Li Shutong (Hong Yi) is close to us, so we went there. It was our first time, even though we were born and raised in Tianjin. Some of his/her quotes: -'At the brink of the sky, at the corners of the earth, my familiar friends wander in loneliness and far from home. - One more ladle of wine to conclude the little happiness that remains; tonight my dreams of parting leave me cold.' This was a man who seemed to lived two lives in one lifetime. During the first half of his life, he created Chinese drama and in the second half of his life he was a patriarch of the Vinaya school. Ordinary people like us can only look up to and worship the man who was a genius throughout his life.

My mother said it’s not good to stay inside all the time, especially during the daytime, because we need sunshine. I told her that we should at least find a destination before going out. So, I searched online and discovered that the former residence of Li Shutong (Hong Yi) was nearby. Even though we were born and raised in Tianjin, we had never been there before, so we decided to visit it for the first time. Some quotes: "At the brink of the sky, at the corners of the earth, my familiar friends wander in loneliness, far from home. One more ladle of wine to conclude the little happiness that remains; tonight, my dreams of parting leave me cold." A man who lived two lives in one lifetime. In the first half of his life, he pioneered Chinese drama, and in the second half, he became a patriarch of the Vinaya school. Ordinary people like us can only look up to and admire a man who was a genius throughout his life.

My mother said it’s not good to stay inside all the time, especially during the daytime, because we need sunshine. I told her that we should at least find a destination before going out. So, I searched online and discovered that the former residence of Li Shutong (Hong Yi) was nearby. Even though we were born and raised in Tianjin, we had never been there before, so we decided to visit it for the first time. Some quotes: "At the brink of the sky, at the corners of the earth, my familiar friends wander in loneliness, far from home. One more ladle of wine to conclude the little happiness that remains; tonight, my dreams of parting leave me cold." A man who lived two lives in one lifetime. In the first half of his life, he pioneered Chinese drama, and in the second half, he became a patriarch of the Vinaya school. Ordinary people like us can only look up to and admire a man who was a genius throughout his life. Key Corrections & Tips: 1. "Not good to not go out" → "Not good to stay inside all the time" - This sounds more natural and avoids the double negative. 2. "During the day time" → "During the daytime" - "Daytime" is one word. 3. "We should find a destination at least" → "We should at least find a destination before going out" - The new version is smoother and clearer. 4. "Close to us" → "Nearby" - "Nearby" is more natural when referring to places. 5. "Even though were born and raised in Tianjin" → "Even though we were born and raised in Tianjin" - Missing "we" and small grammar fix. 6. "Created Chinese drama" → "Pioneered Chinese drama" - "Pioneered" is a better word to describe a groundbreaking contribution. 7. "Look up to and worship" → "Look up to and admire" - "Worship" sounds too strong for admiration in this context. Your writing is already quite good! The main improvements are in fluency and word choice. Keep it up!