1. “virtual Gatherings with Zoom” → “virtual gatherings on Zoom” • “Gatherings” doesn’t need to be capitalized. • “With Zoom” sounds awkward; “on Zoom” is more natural. 2. “I’m interested in it. is it still open?” → “I’m very interested in joining. Is it still open?” • “Interested in it” is vague; “interested in joining” is clearer. • “Is” should be capitalized as it starts a new sentence.