Could someone check these sentences and make them sound more natural?. Please feel free to edit or make any changes you deem necessary -Can you bring a chocolate cake to the event? [or could you/can you please/please can you] - As you know, many guests are on a diet or have an intolerance to gluten or lactose, so bringing a chocolate cake to the party might not be a healthy idea. I could bring a dessert that everyone will love, whether they are watching their gluten, lactose or calorie intake!