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Adejoke Azeez
Today, after i woke up, i pray ,eat and wash my dishes afterwards i went to do my laundry and took a nap for a while after waking up and shower and took a short trip to my elder sister place cause we both had a plan to go the market tomorrow.
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المدعو
Casey
مُعلم محترف
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Today, after i woke up, i pray → pray ,ed eat and wash my dishes afterwards i went to do my laundry and took a nap for a while after waking up and shower and took a short trip to wash → washed after waking up and shower → ... and showerING my elder sister place → my elder sister'S place cause we both had a plan to go the market tomorrow → we... HAVE a plan to go to the market tomorrow If you say you "had" a plan, I understand that you no longer have this plan. It would be best to break this post up into at least three different sentences using punctuation.
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أظهِر المزيد
Casey
we both had a plan to go the market tomorrow → we... HAVE a plan to go to the market tomorrow (If you say you "had" a plan, I understand that you no longer have this plan.)
٢٥ مايو ٢٠٢٢ · قم بالرد
Casey
It would be best to break this post up into at least three different sentences using punctuation.
٢٥ مايو ٢٠٢٢ · قم بالرد
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italki English
Today, after iI woke up, i pray ,eed, ate and washed my dishes afterwards i, I went to do my laundry and took a nap for a while a. After waking up, I took and shower and took a short trip tovisited my elder sister place because we both had a plan to go the market tomorrow.
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المدعو
Casey
مُعلم محترف
Today, after iI woke up, iI pray ,eed, ate and washed my dishes a. Afterwards iI went to do my laundry and took a nap for a while a. After waking up and shower and ing I took a short trip to my eolder sister's place , because we both had a plan to go the market together tomorrow.
Here is another try to do it in the way which italki expects.
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هل تريد التطور بشكل أسرع؟
انضم لمجتمع التعلّم هذا وجرّب التمرينات المجانية!
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Adejoke Azeez
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