My country ( Sri Lanka )

My motherland is Sri lanka.It is a one of the most popular asian countries. It is surrounded by the Indian Ocean. So that People have called it ''the pearl of the Indian Ocean''. Thambapanni, Ceylon,and kadeepa are many names that called by ancestral. Ancestral names for Siri Lanka include Thambapanni, Ceylon, and Kadeepa. Sri jayawardenepura is the capital of Sri Lanka. Sri Lanka made SINHALA as the main language in our country.There is a long and pride proud history in Sri Lanka.It was a British colony before 1948 But out until our heroes could rescued (freed)  it from them. That day was confirmed as our independent Independence Day in 1948 of February 4th on February 4th, 1948.
My motherland is a Buddhist country. There are four main religions such including as Buddhism, Islam, Hinduism, and Christianity. And also it It is also a democratic country. My country is rich of in many resourses. Even though it is a small island, now it has become a miracle because of their its beauty. There are a lot of marvellous places. The amazing gardens, attractive waterfalls, beautiful rivers, forests and various plants, and flowers are the main benefactors of increased the beauty. The attractiveness is the main reasone for the increase in tourism because of the attractiveness. Now the Sigiriya, which was used as a rock shelter, is included as part of the a world heritage. The education system is somewhat familiar to the British system. In politics, there is side there has a two party system such as the united national party and Sri Lanka freedom party (you might need to capitalizae the names of the parties).The formal president is hon.Mahinda Rajapaksha. He ended a 25 years long civil war and LTTE terrorism in the country. So that Thus, his name has included to the great heroes in Sri Lanka.
Our country has many cultural events such as Sinhala & Tamil new year, Ramazan, thai pongal, Christmas, etc. All of the nationalities can live peacefully after the war. And also The next step is to nominate Sri Lanka as the emerging the wonder of Asia. The all lions are raising for make that dream come true! (I'm not sure if you are trying to say "all of the lions are fundraising to make that dream come true"). I love my country a lot!

Really good job! I added a few corrections. There weren't too many mistakes, mostly just punctuation and grammar. Always remember to capitalize proper nouns like Sri Lanka, Indian Ocean, and names. Also, ALWAYS remember to leave a space after punctuation marks like commas and periods. I enjoyed reading it