Paula
Is it better to have older or younger parents? Parents are very important in all the stages of life. They are near you, taking care since you were only a child. But your family would be very different depending on the age of your parents, is it better to have young or old parents? The obviously thing of this is that if you have younger parents you will be able to spend more time with them in life than if they were very old. In addition, having younger parents can be funnier too. For example, you are more likely to have common interests and hobbies if you are close in age. You have a similar mind and it's easy that your parents can understand you. On the other hand, older parents have advantages too. They have lived more experiences so they can give you better advices that can help you with your problems. They are settled down and you have a role model or people to look up to. In my opinion, these points are only general reasons. If it is better to have younger or older parents depends on each person. The most important is getting on well with your parents because they can support you a lot.
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Is it better to have older or younger parents?

Parents are very important in all the stages of life. They are near you, taking care of you since you were only a child. But your family would be very different depending on the age of your parents, is it better to have young or old parents?

The obviously thing of this is that if you have younger parents you will be able to spend more time with them in life than if they were very old. In addition, having younger parents can be funnier (more fun) too. For example, you are more likely to have common interests and hobbies if you are close in age. You have a similar mind and it's easy that your parents can understand you.

On the other hand, older parents have advantages too. They have lived more experiences so they can give you better advices that can help you with your problems. They are settled down and you have a role model or people to look up to.

In my opinion, these points are only general reasons. If it is better to have younger or older parents depends on each person. The most important is getting on well with your parents because they can support you a lot.

 

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Great text.. Minor notes::

 

taking care of you:: The sentence is missing an object that is 'taking care of ....'

funnier vs. (more fun):: Funnier implies something humorous causing laughter.

More fun, implies to enjoy something pleasurable.

Subtle differences, but from the context a readier would assume you mean the later.

have lived more experiences::  Your sentence is correct, but it's better to ommit lived.

The main focus of the sentence is on the experiences, which gives you a stronger meaning without shifting the meaning away from their old age.


Good luck

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