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The Kristina Pimenov Case Kristina Pimenova is a 9-year girl, she has more than 630000 Instagram followers ans she has been working as a model sence she was 3 years old. She is known on the net as the "most beuatiful girl in the world" and she receives more than 40000 euros each year due to her angelical appearance.It's that image which has made her to be the principal model in Dolce and Gabanna, Roberto Caballi and Armani fashion shows. Last Tuesday she had to participate in 080 Barcelona Fashion Show, but at the end she had to watch the show from the front row. The official version this is due to a problem wint her contract in the last moment. The truth is that the big expectation in the mass media due to the Kristina participation has opened a debate about the participation of children in these kind of shows. Anna Claret, which works as a Psychologyst in the Dexeus Institute, explains that it is very important to have clear what values are transmited at these age, With the show participations we are transmiting to this girl that her grat value has to be the beauty What will happen when she arrives to the adolescence and has spots and blemishes in her face? How can we make her to understand then than the beauty is a value that not works anymore and she needs other values?The physical appearance is a mayfly thing. Despite all the inconvenients, Claret recognises that travelling increases the knwolegde and experiences of Kristina, that in that moment speaks nine languages, has learnt hpw to behaviout in front of people, tasted new foods.
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The Kristina Pimenov Case

Kristina Pimenova is a 9-year girl, she who has more than 630,000 Instagram followers and she has been working as a model since she was 3 years old. She is known on the net as the "most beautiful girl in the world" and she receives more than 40,000 euros each year due to her angelical appearance. It's that image which has made led her to be the principal model in Dolce and Gabanna, Roberto Caballi and Armani fashion shows. Last Tuesday she had was to participate in 080 Barcelona Fashion Show, but at in the end she had to watch the show from the front row.
The official version is that this is was due to a problem with her contract in at the last moment. The truth is that the big expectation in the mass media due to the Kristina's participation has opened a debate about the participation of children in these kind of shows.
Anna Claret, which works as a Psychologyst in the Dexeus Institute, explains that it is very important to have make clear what values are transmitted at these ages, With the show participations we are transmiting indicating to this girl that her great value has to be the beauty. What will happen when she arrives to the at adolescence and has spots and blemishes in on her face? How can we make her to understand then than the that beauty is a value that does not works anymore and that she needs other values? The physical appearance is a mayfly an ever-changing thing. Despite all the inconvenients inconvenience, Claret recognises that travelling increases the knowledge and experiences of Kristina, that in that moment she already(?) speaks nine languages, has learnt how to behaviout behave in front of people, and tasted new foods.

 

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You can say either: "has made her the principal" or has led her to be the principal"

I'm not sure if I correctly translated what you were trying to say with "in that moment speaks nine languages"

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