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I need help:) Writing an informal letter. Please, help me with my task! I have written a letter and now I wanna know are there many mistakes or not:) The task is: You have received a letter from your English-speaking pen-friend Jane who writes: "… Yesterday my Mum asked me to help her about the house. We were very busy with cleaning up after the birthday party the whole morning. I got quite tired and even missed my fitness class. What are your family duties, if any? Is there anything you especially like or dislike about house work? Do you find helping your parents necessary, why or why not? Oh, I have some great news! I got a lovely kitten for my birthday..." Write a letter to Jane. In your letter: 1. answer her questions 2. ask 3 questions about her kitten My response is: Dear Jane, Thank you for the letter. I was happy to hear from you again after such a long time! I really should have written sooner, but I've been busy with my exams. Well, in your letter you ask me about my family dutes. Actually, there're some duties that I should do, such as washing up the dishes, cleaning up my room, walking with our dog, washing clothes and so on. I can't say that I dislike something about housework, but there is one thing that I absolutely adore and it's cooking! I really enjoy it! As for me, helping parents is very necessary because parents works a lot and they gets tired in the end of a day, so it's better to do everything to help them in order to make their life easier. Great news about your new pet! I hope that you'll get on well with this kitten! Is it a boy or a girl? What color is its fur? What's its name? Well, I'd better go now as I have to do my homework. Take care and keep in touch! Best wishes, Natya
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Dear Jane, 

Thank you for the letter. I was happy to hear from you again after such a long time! I really should have written sooner, but I've been busy with my exams.

Well, in your letter you ask me about my family duties. Actually, there're some duties that I should do, such as washing up the dishes, cleaning up my room, walking with our dog, washing clothes and so on. I can't say that I like something about housework, but there is one thing that I absolutely adore and it's cooking! I really enjoy it!

As for me, helping parents is very necessary because my parents work a lot and they get tired at the end of the day, so it's better to do everything to help them in order to make their life easier.

Great news about your new pet! I hope that you'll get on well with this kitten! Is it a boy or a girl? What color is its fur? What's its name?

Well, I'd better go now as I have to do my homework.

Take care and keep in touch!

Best wishes,
Natya

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