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I like to sing,I dream to be a singer. Now I am learning to sing. I have a good teacher.She is very good at singing and teaching students to sing. I ever asked her,Why she didn' t sing in a bar. She said,she ever sang in a bar when she was a student at university,it was not that safe for a woman to sing in a bar,especially at midnight. There were many bad people,they didn't respect a singer . Sometimes some people made fun of her and laughed at her. Sometimes some people wanted to deliberately disturb her when she was singing. All of these were bad memories,but teaching students to sing can be respected, many students were grateful to her and respected her hard work. I understood,I was sorry about her bad past,I was upset about my dream,because I wanted to be a singer.I did not know whether I should give up this dream. Not thinking that bad news,I am happy to learn to sing.My teacher has many interesting ways to help my learning. I am grateful to her. Although sometimes,I am upset and lost about my future.
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I like to sing; I dream to be a singer. Now I am learning to sing. I have a good teacher. She is very good at singing and teaching students how to sing. I asked her once why she didn' t sing in a bar. She said she used to sing in a bar when she was a university student, it was not that safe for a woman to sing in a bar, especially at midnight. There were many bad people who didn’t respect her. Sometimes some people made fun of her and laughed at her or some others wanted to deliberately disturb her when she was singing. All of these were bad memories but teaching students to sing can be respected, many students were grateful to her and respected her hard work. I understood and I was sorry about her past. I was upset about my dream, because I wanted to be a singer. I did not know whether I should give up this dream. Regardless, I am happy to learn to sing and my teacher has many interesting ways to help my learning. I am grateful to her although sometimes I am upset and lost about my future.
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I like to sing,I dream of being a singer. Now I am learning to sing. I have a good teacher. She is very good at singing and teaching students to sing. I once asked her why she didn' t sing in a bar. She said that she ever sang in a bar when she was a student at university,it was not that safe for a woman to sing in a bar,especially at midnight. There were many bad people,and they didn't respect a singer . Sometimes some people made fun of her and laughed at her. Sometimes some people wanted to deliberately disturb her when she was singing. All of these were bad memories,but teaching students to sing is respected, many students were grateful to her and respected her hard work. I understood,I was sorry about her bad past,I was upset about my dream,because I wanted to be a singer. I did not know whether I should give up this dream. Not thinking about her bad experience,I am happy to learn to sing. My teacher has many interesting ways to help my learning. I am grateful to her. Sometimes,I am upset andconfused about my future.
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I like to sing, and I dream of becoming a singer. Now, I am learning to sing. I have a great teacher who is very skilled at singing and teaching students. Once, I asked her why she didn’t sing in a bar. She told me that she used to sing in bars when she was a university student, but it wasn’t very safe for a woman, especially late at night. She shared that there were many unpleasant experiences. Some people didn’t respect singers, made fun of her, or even tried to disturb her while she was performing. These were bad memories for her. However, teaching students to sing has brought her a lot of respect and gratitude from her students, which she finds rewarding. I understood her reasons and felt sorry about her difficult past. At the same time, I became a bit upset about my own dream because I also want to become a singer. I wondered whether I should give up this dream. But for now, I try not to dwell on negative thoughts. I’m happy to be learning to sing, and my teacher has many creative ways to help me improve. I am truly grateful for her guidance, even though sometimes I feel lost and uncertain about my future.
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