yhemusa
Does ‘no injuries were sustained’ sound natural? An English learner presented this sentence for correction: -- She fell off the double-decker bed, albeit no injuries were sustained.-- I have a vague feeling that, except the errors, the use of 'sustain' as in 'injuries were sustained' (in the passive)is not so natural. I'd prefer something like: She fell off the bunk red, but fortunetely uninjured/ but luckily did not sustain injuries. So is the use in passive natural indeed?
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The most natural way to say this is - she fell off the bunk bed, but fortunately she wasn't injured/hurt. The original sentence is very formal and sounds like a police statement.
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Agree with you. The use of passive in this sentence is unnecessary (the person is surely more important!) and so using the passive makes it sound very formal. I reckon it would work in a newspaper for this reason: “numerous injuries were sustained in the aftermath of the earthquake” - because it sounds more formal.
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yhemusa
المهارات اللغوية
العربية, الصينية (المندرية), الصينية (الكانتونية), الإنجليزية, الفرنسية, الألمانية, اليابانية, الروسية, الإسبانية
لغة التعلّم
الإنجليزية, الروسية