My hometown is Chaoshan and I brow and grow up in Shenzhen. I want to talk about Shenzhen this city. Other people say "If you come to Shenzhen and you are becoming Shenzhen person." Because Shenzhen i

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My hometown is Chaoshan and I brow and grow up in Shenzhen. I want to talk about Shenzhen this city. Other people say "If you come to Shenzhen and you are becoming Shenzhen person." Because Shenzhen is a Migrant city. All the people come from another city and live in this city. I remember when I was a kid, my classmate from different city and speak Mandarin, Cantonese, Hakka, Teochew. But we are in the class speak Mandarin. That's the reason why I can speak some various . Shenzhen people always work overtime, because the prices and houses are expensive. People work in Shenzhen away 996. 996 refers to a working system that requires employees to work from 9:00 AM to 9:00 PM, six days a week. The "women of Shenzhen" means that women meet and do not talk about gossip and family affairs, but about making money. Although people who live in Shenzhen have high life pressure, this city attracts young people from all over the country. So this city is a very younger city . The climate is pleasant, the greening is good, the roads are clean, free parks, convenient metro ,various libraries and cultural centersand and safe public security management.

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My hometown is Chaoshan, I was born and grew up in Shenzhen. I want to talk about Shenzhen city. Other people say, "If you come to Shenzhen you will become a Shenzhen person", because Shenzhen is a migrant city. People come from another city and live in this city. I remember when I was a kid, my classmate from a different city spoke Mandarin, Cantonese, Hakka and Teochew. But in the class we spoke Mandarin. That's the reason why I can speak different languages. Shenzhen people always work overtime, because the prices and houses are expensive. People who work in Shenzhen work a 996. 996 refers to a working system that requires employees to work from 9:00 AM to 9:00 PM, six days a week. The "women of Shenzhen" means that women meet and do not talk about gossip and family affairs, but about making money. Although people who live in Shenzhen have high life pressure, this city attracts young people from all over the country. So, this city is full of young people. The climate is pleasant, the grass is green, the roads are clean, free parks, convenient metro, various libraries and cultural centersand and safe public security management.

I hope this helps. I couldn't figure out what you were trying to say in some few sentences, I would love to go through the corrections with you to understand exactly what you were trying to say. Overall this is good work.

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