SIN KA HIM, Perry
Yes, i have travelled alone to Singapore when i was 23 years old. At that time, i just finished my study and decided to look for a job after vacation. I decided to go there because the country was close to me that i could take about one hour flight and they were safe. I lived in the hostal in Chinatown when i was in Singapore, the hygiene and quality people impressed me because i seldemed see rubblish in the Street and people were always reading when travelling in the train. I enjoyed the time in Singapore and made some friends from Ghana in hostel, i still had my friend contact after years. Unless the high living expense in Singapore and less wind in city, everything was good for me.
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Yes, I travelled alone to Singapore when I was 23 years old. At that time, I had just finished my studies and decided to look for a job after the vacation. I decided to go there because the country was close to me, about a one hour flight away and safe. I lived in a hostel in Chinatown when i was in Singapore, the hygiene and quality of people impressed me because i seldom saw rubblish in the street and people were always reading when travelling on the train. I enjoyed the time in Singapore and made some friends from Ghana in the hostel, I still keep in contact with them now . Apart from the high cost of living in Singapore and it being more/less windy (not sure what you mean here) everything was good for me.
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