Long years dreams. Is the happy feeling gonna last the rest of your life after once you get it? I think it won’t. You may want to find another one. Life is repeating the process.

yano yujin

19. Okt. 2024 03:14

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Long years dreams. Is the happy feeling gonna last the rest of your life once you get it? I think it won’t. You may want to find another one. Life is repeating the process. Could also be: 'seek another one' or 'chase another one'. Also, alternatively: 'Long years' yearnings'

I offered a few small suggestions, I didn't want to change too much as it read like poetry, but have instead suggested some alternative word choices at the end.

19. Okt. 2024 08:20

Long time dreams. Is the happy feeling gonna last the rest of your life once you get it? I think it won’t. You may want to find another one. Life is about repeating the process.

19. Okt. 2024 08:46

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