To improve the first sentence: It seems like it will be 36℃ (96.8℉) on Friday. Or: It seems Friday will be 36℃ (96.8℉). Or even better, specify why it seems this way, ie, what is your information source. The second sentence is technically OK, but lacking detail: It's September 20th! To improve it slightly, you could say: It will be September 20th! But ideally you'd give a reason why this is important to know. When I Googled "Tokyo weather", Google suggested ... Or: When I searched Google for "Tokyo weather", it suggested ... ... I search "Toyko weather crazy" and "Breaking news: Kantō (Eastern Japan) weather crazy". LOL. What's going on? Or: What's up with that?