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Today I went to Yanaka ,Tokyo as an activity of my university. Fortunately,it was not rainy so we could walk around there without umbrella. In Yanaka, I investigated how often the signboard was written in the other languages. Because around the Yanaka district is popular with foreigners for it’s traditionally Japanese atmosphere. I enjoyed walking and eating although it was a field work. It was fun.
12. Juni 2022 15:50
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Today my university went on a field trip to Yanaka ,Tokyo. Fortunately,it was not rainy so we could walk around without an umbrella. In Yanaka, I noticed the signboard was written in many other languages,because the Yanaka district is popular with foreigners for it’s traditional Japanese atmosphere. I enjoyed walking and eating although it was a field work.It was fun.
You did an amazing job and this sounded like a really great field trip. I was in Japan in 2017 and can't wait to go back. My name is Vanessa and I have been professionally teaching English to children and adults for over 4 years. If you are looking for an English teacher have a look at my profile and reviews. I have availability today and this week.
13. Juni 2022
Today I went to Yanaka, Tokyo on a field trip with my university. Fortunately it was not rainy so we could walk around there without an umbrella. In Yanaka, I investigated how often the signboard was (the signboards were <--- was it one signboard or many?) written in other languages. Because the Yanaka district is popular with foreigners for its traditionally Japanese atmosphere. I enjoyed walking and eating even though it was field work (it was a field trip). It was fun.
Well done :) I put a couple of extra comments in parentheses (like this) where there may have been two different things that you meant.
12. Juni 2022
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