A postcard about my holiday
Hi! This time I've tried to write a postcard about my holiday! What do you think? How did I do?Dear Jean
How are you doing? I'm writing to you from Kołobrzeg at the Polish Seaside seaside. I'm there here with my family. We have are having a great time, although the weather isn't so as good, as we'd like. Therefore we spent our first day on a campside in the campsite, where we are staying. Yesterday morning we climbed up to the lighthouse and the (view was OR views were) really great. And Then in the afternoon we went to the beach, where we were sunbathing did some sunbathing and we were having a bath bathed in the seaSea. Tomorrow we're taking a treepboat (not sure what this is) onto the lake next to our campside campsite. and Then in the evening we are going shopping and then eating followed by ice-cream.
On Saturday we're going to buy buying some souvenirs suvenires and finally on Sunday we're coming back home.
Anyway, I'll tell you everything, when you will arrive to come and see me next week.
Hope to see you! Looking forward to seeing you!
Bye for now!
Kate.
Hi Kate, well done. Apart from treepboat, I have corrected spelling and grammar. Other parts are not incorrect, but I've rephrased them to sound more English. Hope it helps.
A postcard about my holiday
Hi! This time I tried to write a postcard about my holiday! What do you think? How did I do?
Dear Jean
How are you doing? I'm writing to you from Kołobrzeg at the Polish Seaside. I'm there with my family. We have a great time, though the weather isn't so good, as we'd like. Therefore we spent our first day on a campside, where we are staying. Yesterday morning we climbed up to the lighthouse and the view were really great. And in the afternoon we went to the beach, where we were sunbathing and we were having a bath in the Sea. Tomorrow we're taking a treepboat on the lake next to our campside and in the evening we are going shoping and then eating ice-cream.
On Saturday we're buying some suvenires and on Sunday we're coming back home.
Anyway, I'll tell you everything, when you will arrive to me next week.
Hope to see you!
Bye for now!
Kate.
