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Some people think zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However, some people think zoos In the current society,we have much access to knowing different animals.Visiting the zoo is one of the convenient ways.However,there is an increasing debate about whether the zoo should be established ,and be opened to the public.Different people have comparable opinions. Some people think zoos are horrible,and it is unfair to animals.They think our government should close the zoo.The most important reason is that animals belong to nature,and zoos are not their real home.And in some way,living in zoos is crucial to animals.With time goes by,they will lose their fundamental skills which are essential to adapting to wild environment.As reported,some animals that spending a long time on zoos finally died,because of not adapting to the natural life again.We know that some animals are living by groups,but they are closed by separate ways in the zoo.Animals have their own living ,and we should not forbid it. Although some people think we should close the zoo,others have different ideas.They think zoos are useful to protect the rare animals,and it provides animals a safe place.Firstly,many people are killing precious wild animals to obtain more money.We can see that the number of rare animals is decreasing from many news.Zoos are good places to hold back illegal actions.Secondly,the environment has suffered from pollution,and some animals are losing their previous home.Zoos are good choices to those animals.So,the zoo is really a better place to protect animals. Those two opinions are all correct,but I think we should not close all zoos in today.We can develope our zoos' facilities to improve animals' living environment,and let them feel that zoos are familiar to wild environment.We can also training animals through natural methods,so they can adapt to nature successfully.All in all,closing the zoo is not an effective way,what we should do is developing the zoo's environment.
27. Okt. 2012 01:21
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第二段第三行,crucial应该为cruel吧
12. Oktober 2013

Some people think zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However, some people think zoos are useful to protect the rare animals. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

 

In the current society,we have much access to knowing different animals.Visiting the zoo is one of the convenient ways.However,there is an increasing debate about whether the zoo should be established ,and be opened to the public.Different people have comparable opinions.

Some people think zoos are horrible,and it is unfair to animals.They think our government should close the zoo.The most important reason is that animals belong to nature,and zoos are not their real home.And in some way,living in zoos is crucial to animals.With time goes by,they will lose their fundamental skills which are essential to adapting to wild environment.As reported,some animals that spending a long time on zoos finally died,because of not adapting to the natural life again.We know that some animals are living by groups,but they are closed by separate ways in the zoo.Animals have their own living ,and we should not forbid it.

Although some people think we should close the zoo,others have different ideas.They think zoos are useful to protect the rare animals,and it provides animals a safe place.Firstly,many people are killing precious wild animals to obtain more money.We can see that the number of rare animals is decreasing from many news.Zoos are good places to hold back illegal actions.Secondly,the environment has suffered from pollution,and some animals are losing their previous home.Zoos are good choices to those animals.So,the zoo is really a better place to protect animals.

Those two opinions are all correct,but I think we should not close all zoos in today.We can develope our zoos' facilities to improve animals' living environment,and let them feel that zoos are familiar to wild environment.We can also training animals through natural methods,so they can adapt to nature successfully.All in all,closing the zoo is not an effective way,what we should do is developing the zoo's environment.

27. Oktober 2012
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