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Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of mobile phones? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Nowadays technology`s world has advanced to much. Two decade ago, nothing could think that there were all this object which doing the life easier. It is a big advantage for example. On the one hand, i think that mobile phones are very good advantages. Although it depend on the use that you do. Aforetime, if you were driving (¿or drove?) and your car damaged, you couldn't phone anyone. If you had got a teen song and he went to a pub, you couldn't phone him. If a familiar lived in the other country, you couldn't tell him/her every day you life. To conclude, this are many examples for explain that the mobile phone are very important in our lifes. Thinking as a teenager, the mobile phone is a good way for meeting people. I think that if you have problems for meet people, the best way is talking through the message. the application whatsap has revolutionize the world. Moreover, nowadays, i think that there aren´nt anyone who haven´t got it. This is very weirdest. I love the mobile phone because, i can t speak with my friend so quickly as I want. On the other hand, I think that all good objets have downsides. In my opinion, the main problem isn´t the mobile phone per se. The problem is that use you do of this objects. Certainly, teenager spend to overly hours with their phones. I can see how they are eating together and they don´t speak because your phones are the protagonist. The comunication is injured so. They need have your mobile phone all time in their hands. For these reasons their estudies worsen. To conclude, I admit that i´m one of them, I need use my phone less time. We have to think that it is worse for our lives, and we dont let that the phone master our own life. But, in spite of, i think thais the mobile phone is the best invention ever.
25. Nov. 2013 21:42
Korrekturen · 3

     Technology has advanced very much. Two decades ago no one could imagine all the new products available today. One example of a new technological product is the cell phone. 

     I think that cell phones provide many advantages depending on how we use them. Prior to the cell phone, making emergency calls after accidents was impossible. If your friend was out in a pub you couldn't call him, and talking to family overseas was rare. There are many more advantages to cell phones, too. For teenagers, cell phones are a good way to meet people. If they have problems meeting people, text messaging may help. The cell phone has revolutionized the world. There are not many people without a cell phone today. It feels weird, but I love my cell phone because I can talk to my friends as often as I want, yet cell phones may have a downside to them.
     The downside is that many teenagers spend too much time on their cell phones. I've seen people eating together who never speak during their meal because they are busy on their cell phones. This causes problems with social conversation and school work because teenagers can't put their cell phones down. 
     In conclusion, I admit that I'm one of them; I use my cell phone a lot too. We need to realize that excessive cell phone use makes our lives worse. We mustn't let cell phones master our lives, yet in spite of everything, I still believe that cell phones are the best technological invention ever. 

26. November 2013

Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of mobile phones?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, technology`s world has advanced too much. Two decades ago, nothing one could would think that there were all this these objects which doing the make life easier. For example, It  technology is a big advantage for example.

On the one hand, i I think that mobile phones are very good advantages,. Aalthough it depends on the use that you do how you use them. Aforetime Previously, if you were driving (¿or drove? "Driving" is correct.) and your car damaged broke down, you couldn't phone anyone. If you had got a teen song (Song doesn't make sense here; who are you talking about?) and he went to a pub, you couldn't phone him. If a familiar friend lived in the another country, you couldn't tell him/her about every day of your life. To conclude, this These are many examples for explaining that the mobile phones are very important in our lifes lives. Thinking as a teenager, the mobile phone is a good way for meeting people. I think that if you have problems for meeting people, the best way is talking through the messages. tThe application whatsap has revolutionized the world. Moreover, nowadays, i I think that there aren´nt anyone  people who haven´t got it (Or: "I don't think there is anyone who doesn't have it."). This is very the weirdest. I love the mobile phone because, i can t speak with my friend so as quickly as I want.

On the other hand, I think that all good objets objects have downsides. In my opinion, the main problem isn´t the mobile phone per se.; Tthe problem is that use you do of this how you use the objects. Certainly, teenagers spend to overly too many hours with their phones. I can see how they are eating together and they don´t speak because your their phones are the protagonist ("Protagonist" means "main character," like in a story; that word doesn't really fit here. A better choice might be "too important."). The comunication is injured so damaged ("Injured" usually only refers to living things.). They need have your their mobile phones in their hands at all times in their hands. For these reasons their estudies studies worsen (Or "get worse").

To conclude, I admit that i I´m one of them,; I need to use my phone less time. We have to think that it is worse for our lives, and we don't let that the phone master our own life. But, i In spite of that, i I think thais that the mobile phone is the best invention ever.

 

 

25. November 2013

Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of mobile phones?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays technology`s world the world of technology has advanced to much. Two decades ago, nothing nobody would have thought think that there were all this object which doing the life easierthese objects that make life easier. It is a big advantage for example.

On the one hand, i think that mobile phones are very good advantages have many benefits. Although it depends on its use the use that you do. Aforetime, if you were driving (¿or drove?) and your car was damaged, you couldn't phone anyone. If you had got a teen song?? and he went to a pub, you couldn't phone him. If a familiar friend lived in the other country, you couldn't tell him/her every day you life talk to them every day. To conclude, this are many examples which show for explain that the mobile phone are very important in our lifes lives. Thinking as a teenager, the mobile phone is a good way for meeting people. I think that if you have problems meeting for meet people, the best way is talking through the message. the application whatsap whatsapp has revolutionized the world. Moreover, nowadays, i think that there aren´nt isnt anyone who hasn't haven´t got it. This is very weirdest rare?. I love the mobile phone because, i can t speak with my friend so quickly as I want as much as i want


On the other hand, I think that all good objects technology have has it's downsides. In my opinion, the main problem isn´t the mobile phone per se. The problem is how much you use these that use you do of this objects. Certainly, a teenager spends to overly many hours with their phones. I can see how that they eat are eating together and they don´t speakThis is because your their phones are the protagonists. The comunication is affected badly? injured so. They need have your their mobile phones in their hands all time in their hands. For these reasons their estudies become poor worsen.

To conclude, I admit that i´m one of them, I need use my phone less time. We have to think that it isn't healthy worse for our lives, and we dont shouldn't let that the phones master ruin our lives own life. But, in spite of despite this, i think thais the mobile phone is the one of the best inventions ever created best invention ever.

25. November 2013
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