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A funny thing happened when I was out with my friends... It's my homework: We had to write a story which must begin in this way. Please correct everything! A funny thing happened when I was out with my friends. It was Saturday night and we'd been walking for an hour looking for a place to eat. Everything semmed to be normal, but something happened: completely out of the blue, a weird man dressed in strange bright clothes turned the corner and ran to us. 'I've been looking for you guys' he said 'I've come to the past to warn you, I'm a time traveller. You must know the truth before It's too late' We looked at eatch other, nobody knew what to say. We were frightened but we kept listening to him: 'This information will change your life forever! And the thing is...' 'There you are!' somebody shouted. We saw a police officer running from the same corner where the man had been before. He put handcuffs on the man before he could scape. The officer apologized to us for the incident. He explained that the man had been walking through all the city making jokes and scaring people. He apologized again and then both went away. Finally we kept walking and we found a bar casually called "Future". We spent all the night laughing and talking about this funny and strange experience. Thank you for the help (:
24. Mai 2014 22:58
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A funny thing happened when I was out with my friends...

It's my homework: We had to write a story which must begin in this way. Please correct everything!

A funny thing happened when I was out with my friends. It was (a)Saturday night. We'd been walking for an hour and looking for a place to eat. Everything semmed to be normal, but something happened: completely out of the blue, a weird man dressed in strange bright clothes turned the corner and ran to us.
'I've been looking for you guys' he said 'I've come to the past to warn you, I'm a time traveller. You must know the truth before It's too late'
We looked at eatch other, nobody knew what to say. We were frightened but we kept listening to him: 'This information will change your life forever! And the thing is...'
'There you are!' somebody shouted.
We saw a police officer running from the same corner where the man had been before. He put (the man in)handcuffs before he could scape (escape). The officer apologized to us for the incident. He explained that the man had been walking through all the city making jokes and scaring people. He apologized again and then (they)both went away.
Finally we kept walking and we found a bar casually coincidentally called "Future". We spent all the night laughing and talking about this funny and strange experience.


Thank you for the help (:

24. Mai 2014

A funny thing happened when I was out with my friends...

It's my homework: We had to write a story which must begin in this way. Please correct everything!

A funny thing happened when I was out with my friends. It was Saturday night and we'd been walking for an hour looking for a place to eat. Everything semmed seemed to be normal, but something happened: completely out of the blue, a weird man dressed in strange bright clothes turned the corner and ran to us.
'I've been looking for you guys' he said 'I've come to the past to warn you, I'm a time traveller. You must know the truth before It's too late'
We looked at eatch each other, nobody knew what to say. We were frightened but we kept listening to him: 'This information will change your life forever! And the thing is...'
'There you are!' somebody shouted.
We saw a police officer running from the same corner where the man had been before. He put handcuffs on the man before he could scape escape. The officer apologized to us for the incident. He explained that the man had been walking through all places in the city making jokes and scaring people. He apologized again and then both went away.
Finally we kept walking and we found a bar casually coincidently called "Future". We spent all the night laughing and talking about this funny and strange experience.


Thank you for the help (:

25. Mai 2014
Even my name is prithviraj maru
8. Februar 2022
definitely funny!!
25. Mai 2014
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