LUCY
It has been a long time for me to go on a trip since I had much homework in my school. Anyway, the last trip in Japan left a deep impression on me. I really had a great time there. I travelled in Japan with my family and stayed there for 2 weeks. While being touched by its colourful culture and architectures, I was moved by friendly as well as helpful locals there. I still remembered the day I asked a girl where I could exchange foreign currency in Kyoto. At first, she apologetically shook her head and walked away. But moments later, she rushed towards me and showed me the way to the nearest XDM. It was this experience that made this trip more unforgettable. Besides, living in Minshuku was an unique experience as well. Going to the local mall to pick up our dinner and taking a walk in a nearby park at night made us feel much relaxed. We once took a taxi in Tokyo, but we failed to understanding what the taxi driver was talking about in his English, and then the funniest as well as a little bit weird scene happened. My dad kept speaking Chinese while the taxi driver kept speaking Japanese, both of them waving their hands from side to side as if they had known what they were talking about. Finally, we magically reached to our destination earlier than expected. It was like a sheer wizardry! No matter what, it was this wonderful trip that made me deeply realized there's a big difference between people and government!
19. Mai 2024 16:35
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It has been a long time since I went on a trip as I had so much homework in my school. Anyway, my last trip in Japan left a deep impression on me. I really had a great time there. I travelled to Japan with my family and stayed there for 2 weeks. While being touched by its colourful culture and architectures, I was moved by the friendly as well as helpful locals there. I still remember the day I asked a girl where I could exchange foreign currency in Kyoto. At first, she apologetically shook her head and walked away. But moments later, she rushed towards me and showed me the way to the nearest XDM. It was this experience that made this trip more unforgettable(all the more unforgettable). Besides this, living in Minshuku was a unique experience as well. Going to the local mall to pick up our dinner and taking a walk in a nearby park at night made us feel so/very relaxed. We once took a taxi in Tokyo, but we failed to understand what the taxi driver was talking about in his English. Then the funniest, as well as a little bit weird scene happened. My dad kept speaking Chinese while the taxi driver kept speaking Japanese, both of them waving their hands from side to side as if they knew what the other was talking about. But somehow, we magically reached our destination earlier than expected. It was like a sheer wizardry! No matter what, it was this wonderful trip that made me deeply realize there's a big difference between people and government! Although "unique" starts with the letter "u," it has a "you..." sound. So "an unique" is incorrect. Same for the word "user." "An user" is incorrect. "A user" is correct. "Reach to" is also incorrect. Just say "reach ..."
You're writing is very good. Great work!
20. Mai 2024
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