90 day's training: Day 37 Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰 1) I've been practicing writing English since September. I learned some grammar so I'll try to use them so that I'

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90 day's training: Day 37 Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰 1) I've been practicing writing English since September. I learned some grammar so I'll try to use them so that I'll get used to them. 2) We gave a television to my mother as a birthday present. She was very pleased about it. 3) She offered us a treat a dinner for next month. We'll go to a new restaurant where we've been hoping to go there since it opened. 4) It is raining since noon. The temperature is a little colder than lately but it is still higher than usual. 5) I wanted use new grammar but I thought it was not so many grammars as I thought.

Oct 29, 2024 8:29 AM

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90 day's training: Day 37 Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰 1) I've been practicing writing English since September. I learned some grammar so I'll try to use it so that I'll get used to it. 2) We gave a television to my mother as a birthday present. She was very pleased about it. 3) She offered to treat us to dinner next month. We'll go to a new restaurant we've been hoping to go since it opened. 4) It has been raining since noon. The temperature is a little colder than it has been lately but it is still higher than usual. 5) I wanted to use new grammar rules/constructions, etc but I didn't use as many of them as I thought.

GRAMMAR is uncountable, so THEM does not make sense. You could say "I've learned some rules of grammar" if you want to be specific and use the plural. TREAT DINNER doesn't make sense. I've corrected it to mean she will pay for your dinner. Again, GRAMMAR is uncountable, so no GRAMMARS. Nice job overall.

Oct 30, 2024 5:47 AM

90 day's training: Day 37 Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰 1) I've been practicing to write English since September. I learned some grammar so I'll try to use it so that I'll get used to it. 2) We gave a television to my mother as a birthday present. She was very pleased about it. 3) She offered us a treat for dinner next month. We'll go to a new restaurant which we've been hoping to go to since it opened. 4) It has been raining since noon. The temperature is a little lower than it has been recently but it is still higher than usual. 5) I wanted to use new grammar conventions but there were not as many grammar conventions as I thought.

Very good try. I didn't completely understand the meaning of 4 and 5 but I've done my best to correct it according to what I understand.

Oct 29, 2024 10:08 AM

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