They are wide spread and the flying fish have little chance. The bird has no chance. Now it is a function word. And her “gold fish” didn't swim, and the music didn't Loop where it should. Accordingly

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They are wide spread and the flying fish have little chance. The bird has no chance. Now it is a function word. And her “gold fish” didn't swim, and the music didn't Loop where it should. Accordingly she kept weeping and wailing before the old lady’s coffin. The question struck up as unusual at first. but the more we talked about it with friends, the more we realized that everyone could relate to cool. Man is not much beside the Great birds and beasts. There is a solid place. In the meantime I can see how he acts and if he shows any changes. He apologized profusely. I don't remember middle age now. Populations can also grow steadily. but you have to be in Earnest about renouncing the world. She broke her leg when she played soccer. when do you do the laundry? we become beasts of burden for life.

Mar 22, 2025 3:34 AM

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They are widespread, and the flying fish have little chance. The bird has no chance. Now, it is a function word. Her “goldfish” didn’t swim, and the music didn’t loop where it should. As a result, she kept weeping and wailing before the old lady’s coffin. The question seemed unusual at first, but the more we discussed it with friends, the more we realized that everyone could relate to it. Man is not much compared to the great birds and beasts. There is a solid place. In the meantime, I can see how he behaves and if he shows any changes. He apologized profusely. I don’t remember middle age now. Populations can also grow steadily, but you must be earnest about renouncing the world. She broke her leg when she was playing soccer. When do you do the laundry? We become beasts of burden for life.

1. “Wide spread” → “Widespread”: “Widespread” is one word. 2. “Flying fish have little chance”: This part is clear, but I kept it as is. 3. “The bird has no chance. Now it is a function word.”: This sentence is more cryptic. Without further context, I kept it as it was, though it might need more clarification. 4. “Gold fish” → “Goldfish”: “Goldfish” is one word. 5. “Didn’t Loop” → “Didn’t loop”: “Loop” doesn’t need to be capitalized here. 6. “Accordingly she kept weeping” → “As a result, she kept weeping”: More natural phrasing. 7. “The question struck up as unusual at first” → “The question seemed unusual at first”: “Struck up” doesn’t fit well in this context. 8. “But the more we talked about it with friends, the more we realized that everyone could relate to cool” → “But the more we discussed it with friends, the more we realized that everyone could relate to it”: “Cool” was a bit unclear here, so I substituted it with “it.” 9. “Man is not much beside the Great birds and beasts” → “Man is not much compared to the great birds and beasts”: “Compared to” is the correct phrase. 10. “There is a solid place”: This phrase is still a bit vague. It might need more context. 11. “If he shows any changes”: Kept as is for clarity. 12. “Earnest about renouncing the world”: “Earnest” is used correctly here. 13. “She broke her leg when she played soccer” → “She broke her leg when she was playing soccer”: Correct verb tense for ongoing action. 14. “When do you do the laundry?”: Left this as is—seems to be a simple question. 15. “We become beasts of burden for life”: Kept as is. If you’d like to continue refining or discussing any points, I’d be happy to help! If you want more practice with these kinds of sentences, feel free to book a conversation lesson with me.

Mar 23, 2025 12:53 PM

They are widespread and the flying fish have little chance. The bird has no chance. Now it is a function word. And her “goldfish” didn't swim, and the music didn't loop where it should have. Accordingly she kept weeping and wailing before the old lady’s coffin. The question struck as unusual at first, but the more we talked about it with friends, the more we realized that everyone could relate to cool. Man is not much besides the great birds and beasts. There is a solid place. In the meantime I can see how he acts and if he shows any changes. He apologized profusely. I don't remember middle age now. Populations can also grow steadily. but you have to be in earnest about renouncing the world. She broke her leg when she played soccer. when do you do the laundry? we become beasts of burden for life.

Mar 22, 2025 8:12 AM

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