I like to write postcard or letter for my friends. I hope to express my emotion about my friends by the word. Words make encouraging us. I had written a postcard for a friend. She cried when she got i

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I like to write postcard or letter for my friends. I hope to express my emotion about my friends by the word. Words make encouraging us. I had written a postcard for a friend. She cried when she got it. She told me that she hasn't received the word from another people for thankfulness. Since that day, I'm conscious that is important got encouraged for people. When I receive the feed back from my friends l'm happy also.😄

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Feb 10, 2021 6:19 AM

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I like to write postcards or letters to my friends. I hope to express my emotions to my friends by word. Words encourage us. I wore a postcard to a friend. She cried when she got it. She told me that she hadn't received thanks from anyone in writing. Since that day, I'm conscious that it is important tot encourage people. When I receive feedback from my friends I'm also happy.😄

February 10, 2021

Hi Yanling I won't correct your writing because others have done that already. Your speaking is nice and clear. I especially liked the way you said 'She cried when she got it.' Good stress on the word 'cried'. I have been living in 厦门 but I couldn't return after last 春节，I hope to return if I can. 我有朋友们在深圳。新年快乐。好好学习天天向上！

February 10, 2021

I like to write postcards or letters to my friends. I hope to express my emotion about my friends by word. Words make encouraging us. I had written a postcard for a friend. She cried when she got it. She told me that she hasn't received word from other people for thankfulness. Since that day, I'm conscious that is important to get encouraged people. When I receive feedback from my friends I'm happy also.😄

February 10, 2021

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