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The sun is shining today, and I'm feeling a bit better. Mom and Dad are still feverish, though. We took a short walk outside hoping it would help, but the fever returned later in the day. Looks like we'll have to keep fighting this flu for a few more days. It’s aching all over as hell.
Nov 23, 2024 12:40 PM
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The sun is shining today, and I'm feeling a bit better. Mom and Dad are still feverish, though. We took a short walk outside hoping it would help, but the fever returned later in the day. Looks like we'll have to keep fighting this flu for a few more days. It’s aching all over like hell.
November 24, 2024
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The sun is shining today, and I'm feeling a bit better. Mom and Dad are still feverish, though. We took a short walk outside hoping it would help, but the fever returned later in the day. Looks like we'll have to keep fighting this flu for a few more days. I'm aching all over and it's painful as hell.
You can't say "aching all over as hell". It should be "adjective + as hell" e.g. "hot as hell".
November 23, 2024
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