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His utter dejection, his revulsion, it all disappeared as soon as he saw her. And after exchanging a few words, he experienced sheer bliss. She had forgiven him. Practicing super cool advance adjectives!
Feb 24, 2023 7:34 PM
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His utter dejection, his revulsion - it all disappeared as soon as he saw her. And, after exchanging a few words, he experienced sheer bliss. She had forgiven him! Practicing super cool advanced adjectives!
I added a dash, a comma, and an exclamation point!
February 25, 2023
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His utter dejection, his revulsion, it all disappeared as soon as he saw her. And after exchanging a few words, he experienced sheer bliss. She had forgiven him. Practicing super cool advanced adjectives!
February 24, 2023
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