I’m very curious about studying abroad. I’d like to improve my English skill to talk with people who have different ideas, and to compare Japan and o other countries. I can think more flexibly to know

Chisa

I’m very curious about studying abroad. I’d like to improve my English skill to talk with people who have different ideas, and to compare Japan and o other countries. I can think more flexibly to know another culture because I understand there are many way to reach the goal. Secondly, there are more English information than Japanese. If I want to know the information , I need to wait to publish translation book.

Jan 6, 2022 12:47 AM

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I’m very curious about studying abroad. I’d like to improve my English skills so I can talk with people who have different ideas and so that I can compare Japan with other countries. I can think more flexibly when I know another culture because I understand there are many ways to reach a goal. Secondly, there is more information in English than in Japanese. If I want to know specific information , I need to wait for someone to publish the translated book.

Nice writing! I hope that you can study abroad one day. Please note that "think more flexibly" is grammatically correct, but you will be more easily understood if you use "I can be more open-minded". Please also note that the word information is not a countable noun so we use "is".

January 6, 2022

Very nice writing, if you can notice that I didn’t correct you mainly because you clearly have an understanding on writing English. I want to offer that you join my lessons and I will help you improve your speaking, the more you will talk, the more you’ll be able to even notice mistakes you make grammatically when writing. You can message me anytime 🌸

January 6, 2022

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