Emma
February 18th, 2025 On my way back to home after work, the train was delayed for 30 minutes due to personal injury accident. I waited for a while until it comes. We lined up and no one cut in the line. I was wondering how it would be abroad in the same situation.
Feb 18, 2025 2:50 PM
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February 18th, 2025 On my way back home after work, the train was delayed for 30 minutes due to an accident involving personal injuries. I waited for a while until it came back to normal. We lined up and no one cut in the line. I was wondering how it would be for people abroad in the same situation.
In France, delays in public transportations are frequent, so we are used to it even though we keep finding it annoying. I guess we enjoy complaining after all :).
Feb 18, 2025 2:58 PM
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February 18th, 2025 On my way home after work, the train was delayed for 30 minutes due to a personal injury accident. I waited for a while until it came. We lined up and no one cut in the line. I was wondering how it would be abroad in the same situation.
Feb 18, 2025 9:25 PM
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February 18th, 2025 On my way home from work, the train was delayed for 30 minutes due to a personal injury accident. I waited for a while until it arrived. We lined up, and no one cut in line. I wondered how people would behave in the same situation abroad.
Tip: - "On my way home" (not "on my way back to home")—"home" doesn’t need "to" because it acts as both a noun and an adverb. - "Until it arrived" (instead of "until it comes")—use past tense for consistency. - "Cut in line" (instead of "cut in the line")—the article is unnecessary in this phrase. - "I wondered" (instead of "I was wondering")—a simple past tense is better for a completed thought.
Feb 18, 2025 3:52 PM
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February 18th, 2025 On my way home after work, the train was delayed for 30 minutes due to a personal injury accident. I waited for a while until it came. We lined up and no one cut in the line. I wondered how it would be abroad in the same situation.
Feb 18, 2025 3:06 PM
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