There is a kind of green grape in China. It is very expensive，but it is very delicious. There were many times，that I wanted to buy half kilo of grapes，but I didn't. This saturday，I bought half kilo o

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There is a kind of green grape in China. It is very expensive，but it is very delicious. There were many times，that I wanted to buy half kilo of grapes，but I didn't. This saturday，I bought half kilo of this kind of grapes. Now I am eating it，while playing phone games. I like this kind of grape，And I like the good time it gives to me.

Nov 17, 2024 1:28 PM

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There is a kind of green grape in China. It is very expensive，but it is very delicious. There were many times that I wanted to buy half a kilo of these grapes，but I didn't. This saturday，I bought half a kilo of it. Now I am eating it，while playing games on my phone. I like this kind of grape，And I like the good feeling it gives me/makes me feel.

No comma before "that". And you can use "it" or "these grapes" instead of repeating "this kind of grapes". The sentence holds the same meaning in that case 💐

Nov 17, 2024 1:53 PM

There is a kind of green grape in China. It is very expensive，but it is very delicious. There were many times that I wanted to buy half a kilo of grapes，but I didn't. This saturday，I bought half a kilo of these kind of grapes. Now I am eating them while playing phone games. I like this kind of grape，And I like the good time/feeling it gives to me.

Nov 17, 2024 1:40 PM

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