There are many things in Hungarian culture that make me proud. The first one is our colorful language. Altough Hungarian is deemed the one of the most difficult language in the world it is rich and in

Barbara

There are many things in Hungarian culture that make me proud. The first one is our colorful language. Altough Hungarian is deemed the one of the most difficult language in the world it is rich and inspired lots of authors to write beautyful poems and novels. I try to preserve Hungarian language and always pay attention to using correct grammar and nice vocabulary. The second one that I am proud of it is classical Musik. Hungary is famous of its musicians, hundreds of Hungarian pianists, conductors, singers, composers and violinists contributed to Hungarian musician art. I am also very proud of the Hungarian architechture. Budapest is full of spectacular buildings not to mention our Parlaiment. I am proud of the many talented scientists who have become faamous for their inventions. It is lesss about pride but I like that people are very hosty and can express their feelings to each other. I can continue the list but I do not want to make you bored and appear as if I am baised towards Hungarian culture. Maybe I am.

Feb 18, 2025 5:37 PM

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There are many things in Hungarian culture that make me proud. The first one is our colourful language. Although Hungarian is deemed one of the most difficult languages in the world, it is rich and inspired lots of authors to write beautiful poems and novels. I try to preserve the Hungarian language and always pay attention to using correct grammar and nice vocabulary. The second one that I am proud of is classical music . Hungary is famous for its musicians, hundreds of Hungarian pianists, conductors, singers, composers and violinists contributed to Hungarian musician art. I am also very proud of the Hungarian architechture. Budapest is full of spectacular buildings not to mention our Parliament. I am proud of the many talented scientists who have become faamous for their inventions. It is lesss about pride but I like that people are very welcoming and can express their feelings to each other. I could continue the list but I do not want to make you bored and appear as if I am biased towards Hungarian culture. Maybe I am.

Well done. Nice piece of writing. My corrections are mostly small spelling errors. I hope they help you. Ps Hungary sounds great

Feb 18, 2025 7:43 PM

There are many things in Hungarian culture that make me proud. The first one is our colorful language. Although Hungarian is deemed one of the most difficult languages in the world, it is rich and has inspired lots of authors to write beautiful poems and novels. I try to preserve the Hungarian language and always pay attention to using correct grammar and nice vocabulary. The second one that I am proud of is its classical music. Hungary is famous for its musicians; hundreds of Hungarian pianists, conductors, singers, composers and violinists have contributed to Hungarian musician art. I am also very proud of the Hungarian architecture. Budapest is full of spectacular buildings, not to mention our Parliament. I am proud of the many talented scientists who have become famous for their inventions. This is less about pride, but I like that people are very hospitable and can express their feelings to each other. I can continue the list, but I do not want to bore you and appear as if I am biased towards Hungarian culture. Maybe I am.

1) "nice vocabulary" - this phrase is a bit ambiguous to me, and "nice" isn't a word we use too frequently to describe vocabulary. If you're referring to more academic word choices, I might say "impressive vocabulary". If, instead, you're referring to a formal, polite register of conversation, I might refer to "proper speech". This second one is tricky for me, as an American, because we don't have a very distinct formal register these days. :) 2) I wouldn't say that the use of "not to mention" was perfect, though it's a very tricky phrase to use, so I won't correct it. However, I might have said "especially our Parliament" in that sentence. Great work! I'd recommend focusing on phrasing for introducing ideas, especially as the length of the individual ideas increases.

Feb 18, 2025 8:00 PM

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