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The topic:My family and Appearance. Hello everyone! Please, check my text.Thank you very much in advance. This is a picture of my family. There are four people IN the picture: my father: my mother, my brother and my myself. We are standing in the Sverdlovka street, near the drama theatre. In the background there are the large flowerbed with tulips. In there foreground there is my mother. My mother is a plump, beautiful woman with a charming smile. She is in her twenties, a middle-sized and graceful woman. She is dark-haired and pale blue-eyed. She has got a florid complexion, high forehead, a straight, pointed, thin nose and well-cut lips. She has got a rounded chin and an oval form of face. Her features are regular, delicate, and clear-cut. She has got pinned-up hair. She is a brunette. She makes up very little. She is well-made. She bears herself well. She hold her body upright. Her shoulders are sloping and her legs are small. My mother is holding myself on her hands.My brother is standing between my mother and my father. My brother and myself have got family resemblance. We take after our parents.. My nose and brother’s nose has got the same form as father’s nose. Brother’s colour of hair is alike our father, but lighter.My brother has got flaxen hair and I have got red har. My father is a blond, but his hair darker than my brother.My complexion and brother’s complexion take father our mother.Mine and brother’s cheeks are plump as our mother. My father is in his thirties.He is an imposing , courageous man. He is of medium height.He has got small side-whiskers.His chin is massive, and square and strong jaw.His forehead is high as my mother’s forehead.His nose is fleshy.He has got partly bald head. My mother is with her clothes on a trichromatic sweater and a black skirt.My father is with his clothers on a jean suit and a white shirt. In the picture myself is a red-haired girl.Here I amone year old.My brother is three years old. My mother and father are teahers.My father and mother like to read..Also , my father like to travel, and my my mother like to gather mushrooms. In that time, when the picture was done, my father worked in pedagogical university.
Dec 6, 2011 1:05 PM
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The topic: My family and Appearance.

Hello everyone! Please, check my text. Thank you very much in advance.
This is a picture of my family. There are four people IN  in the picture: my father, my mother, my brother, and my myself. We are standing in the on Sverdlovka street near the drama theatre. In the background there are the is a large flowerbed with tulips. In there foreground there is my mother. My mother is a plump, beautiful woman with a charming smile. She is in her twenties, a middle-sized and graceful woman. She is has dark-haired and pale blue-eyes. She has got a florid rosy complexion, high forehead, a straight pointed thin nose and well-cut  full lips. She has got a rounded chin and an oval form of face. Her features are regular, delicate and clear-cut, She has got pinned-up brown hair. She is a brunette. and her brown hair is pinned up. She is wearing very little makeup.She makes up very little.


She is well-made. She bears sturdy strong and carries herself well. She holds her body upright, and her shoulders are sloping and her legs are small. My mother is holding myself on her hands.me in her arms.  My brother is standing between my mother and my father. My brother and I myself have got a family resemblance. We take after our parents.. My nose and my brother’s nose have got the same form shape as our father’s nose. Brother’s colour of hair is alike our father, but lighter.My brother has got flaxen hair like our father but lighter, and I have got mine is red har. My father is a blond, but his hair darker than my brother.(You already stated this). My complexion and brother’s complexion take father our mother.Mine and brother’s cheeks are plump as our mother.  Our complexions are similar to our parents and both of us have plump cheeks like our mother.
My father is in his thirties.  He is an imposing courageous man. He is of medium height.He and has got small side-whiskers. His chin is massive and his jaw is square and strong jaw.His forehead is high as like my mother’s forehead. His nose is fleshy. He has got partly bald head. and he is going bald.
My mother is with her clothes on is wearing a trichromatic sweater and a black skirt. My father is with his clothers on is wearing a jean suit and a white shirt. In the picture myself is a red-haired girl.Here I am one year old and my hair is flaming red. My brother is three years old. My mother and father are teachers and they both love to read. My father and mother like to read. My father likes to travel, and my my mother like to gather mushrooms. In that time, when the picture was done, taken, my father worked in at a pedagogical university.

December 6, 2011

The topic:My family and Appearance.

Hello everyone! Please, check my text.Thank you very much in advance.
This is a picture of my family. There are four people in the picture: my father, my mother, my brother and my myself. We are standing in the Sverdlovka street, near the drama theatre. In the background there are the large flowerbeds with tulips. In the  foreground there is my mother. My mother is a plump, beautiful woman with a charming smile. She is in her twenties, a middle-sized and graceful woman. She is dark-haired and has pale blue eyes. She has got a florid complexion, high forehead, a straight, pointed, thin nose and well-cut lips. She has got a rounded chin and an oval form of face. Her features are regular, delicate, and clear-cut. She has got pinned-up hair. She is a brunette. She uses very little make up .
She is well-made. She bears herself well. She holds her body upright. Her shoulders are sloping and her legs are small. My mother is holding myself on me in her hands  arms.My brother is standing between my mother and my father. My brother and myself have got family resemblance. We take after look like our parents.. My nose and my brother’s nose both has have got the same form as my father’s nose. Brother’s colour of hair is like our father, but lighter.My brother has got flaxen hair and I have got red hair. My father is a blond, but his hair is darker than my brother.My complexion and brother’s complexion take father our mother  is a mix of both parents.Mine and brother’s cheeks are plump as our mother.
My father is in his thirties.He is an imposing , courageous man. He is of medium height.He has got small side-whiskers.His chin is massive, and square and strong jaw.His forehead is high as my mother’s forehead.His nose is fleshy.He has got partly bald head.
My mother is with her clothes on wearing a trichromatic sweater and a black skirt.My father is with his clothers on a jean suit and a white shirt. In the picture myself is I am a red-haired girl.Here I am one year old.My brother is three years old. My mother and father are teachers.My father and mother Both my parents like to read..Also , my father likes to travel, and my my mother likes to gather mushrooms. In that time, when the picture was done  taken, my father worked in pedagogical university.

December 6, 2011

The topic:My family and Appearance.

Hello everyone! Please, check my text.Thank you very much in advance.
This is the picture of my family. There are four people in the picture: my father: my mother, my brother and myself. We are standing in the Sverdlovka street, near the drama theatre. In the background of the picture there are a large flowerbed with tulips. In there foreground there is my mother. My mother is a plump, beautiful woman with a charming smile. She is in her twenties, a middle-sized and graceful woman. She is dark-haired and pale blue-eyed. She has got a florid complexion, high forehead, a straight, pointed, thin nose and well-cut lips. She has got a rounded chin and the oval form of her face. Her features are regular, delicate, and clear-cut. She has got pinned-up hair. She is a brunette. She makes up very little.
She is well-made. She bears herself well. She holds her body upright. Her shoulders are sloping and her legs are small. My mother is holding me on the hands.My brother is standing between my mother and my father. My brother and I have got family resemblance. We take after our parents. My nose and my brother’s nose has got the same form as father’s nose. My brother’s colour of hair is alike our father, but lighter.My brother has got flaxen hair and I have got red har. My father is a blond, but his hair darker than my brother.My complexion and my brother’s complexion take father our mother.Mine and brother’s cheeks are plump as our mother.
My father is in his thirties.He is an imposing , courageous man. He is of medium height.He has got small side-whiskers.His chin is massive, and square and his jaw is strong.His forehead is high as my mother’s forehead.His nose is fleshy.He has got a partly bald head.
My mother is with her clothes on a trichromatic sweater and a black skirt.My father is with his clothers on a jean suit and a white shirt. In the picture I am a red-haired girl.Here I am one year old.My brother is three years old. My mother and my father are teahers.My father and my mother like to read..Also , my father likes to travel, and my mother likes to gather mushrooms. In that time, when the picture was done, my father worked at pedagogical university.

December 6, 2011
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December 6, 2011

The topic:My family and Appearance.

Hello everyone! Please, check my text.Thank you very much in advance.
This is a picture of my family. There are four people IN the picture: my father: my mother, my brother and my myself. We are standing in the Sverdlovka street, near the drama theatre. In the background there are the large flowerbed with tulips. In there foreground there is my mother. My mother is a plump, beautiful woman with a charming smile. She is in her twenties, a middle-sized and graceful woman. She is dark-haired and pale blue-eyed. She has got a florid complexion, high forehead, a straight, pointed, thin nose and well-cut lips. She has got a rounded chin and an oval form of face. Her features are regular, delicate, and clear-cut. She has got pinned-up hair. She is a brunette. She makes up very little.
She is well-made. She bears herself well. She hold her body upright. Her shoulders are sloping and her legs are small. My mother is holding myself on her hands.My brother is standing between my mother and my father. My brother and myself have got family resemblance. We take after our parents.. My nose and brother’s nose has got the same form as father’s nose. Brother’s colour of hair is alike our father, but lighter.My brother has got flaxen hair and I have got red har. My father is a blond, but his hair darker than my brother.My complexion and brother’s complexion take father our mother.Mine and brother’s cheeks are plump as our mother.
My father is in his thirties.He is an imposing , courageous man. He is of medium height.He has got small side-whiskers.His chin is massive, and square and strong jaw.His forehead is high as my mother’s forehead.His nose is fleshy.He has got partly bald head.
My mother is with her clothes on a trichromatic sweater and a black skirt.My father is with his clothers on a jean suit and a white shirt. In the picture myself is a red-haired girl.Here I amone year old.My brother is three years old. My mother and father are teahers.My father and mother like to read..Also , my father like to travel, and my my mother like to gather mushrooms. In that time, when the picture was done, my father worked at pedagogical university. 

December 6, 2011
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