Social Skill or Good Qualification? In the world today, nothing is more important than the quality of one's education, especially when it comes to job, opportunities and even prosperity of a nation.

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Social Skill or Good Qualification? In the world today, nothing is more important than the quality of one's education, especially when it comes to job, opportunities and even prosperity of a nation. However, as a qualified employee, decent education is not enough. Undoubtly, business today will hire wherever highly-trained or high-skilled workers are located, a case in this point is that over 60% of the new job in the coming decade will require more than a high school diploma. Furthermore, good qualifications which, in most case, means high level education is increasingly a prerequisite for the success and a predictor of the income that person will earn throughout her or his life. More importantly, it is exactly the skill you have learnt define your value to your employers. However, it is undeniable fact that social skills also play a critical role in personal fulfillment. For example, a salesman who has a Bachelor degree in marketing but not knowing how to get along with is customer will outcompete. Especially, schools today are also required to include social skills education into their curriculum. By contrary, teachers today, particularly in china , more teach to test but not the skill that prepare them to the career. Thus, subjects like history and philosophy which can cultivate personal social awareness are squeezed out. In summing up, employees with a good qualifications or education background are important for companies to gain an edge in global market, but what speak more to the long-term success to a business is the worker's social abilities.

Oct 25, 2012 3:11 AM

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Social Skills or Good Great [Paper] Qualification?

In the world today, nothing is more important than the quality of one's education especially when it comes to job, opportunities. and Even the prosperity of a nation hinges on its educated population. However, as to be a qualified great employee, having a decent education is not enough. [I prefer, "possessing the right paper qualifications..."]

Undoubtly, business today will hire wherever only highly-trained or high-skilled workers. are located, A case in this point is that over 60% of the new jobs in the coming decade will require more than a high school diploma. Furthermore, good qualifications which, in most case, means high level education is increasingly a prerequisite for the success and a predictor of the income that person will earn throughout her or his life. Increasingly in the future, paper qualification will be the main predictor and indicator of one's potential income. Hence high education is the prerequisite to one's so call success. More importantly, it is the type of skills that it is exactly the skill you have learnt define your value to your employers are looking for and matches their needs.

However, It is also an undeniable fact that social skills also play a critical crucial role in personal fulfillment [How? I say wrong argument.] the service sector especially those positions that deal with the public directly. For example, a salesman who has a Bachelor degree in marketing but not knowing how to get along with is customer will outcompete A salesman with a Bachelor's degree in marketing is useless if his social skills are lacking. Especially, schools today are also required to include Social skills education into their is a compulsory subject in the school curriculum. By contrary, teachers today, particularly in china , more teach to test but not the skill that prepare them to the career. However, no matter what, teachers are geared more to help students in passing exams rather than preparing them for life. Subjects like such as history and philosophy which can helps in the cultivation of personal social awareness are thus often neglected or relegated to a stepchild status squeezed out.

In summing up, employees with a good qualifications or education background are important for companies to gain an edge in global market, but what speak more to the long-term success to a business is the worker's social abilities. Paper qualification helps you kick the door in but it is the charm and social graces that will determine how long you will last in the company. Savviness is the key in opening higher doors.

These sort of essays are often dull and boring to read because they lack imagery and color. So you need to be more imaginative. Try to avoid the use of such terms as, "furthermore", "firstly", "secondly", "in summing up", "in conclusion" etc. These are superfluous words and sounds very legal like; very cold. Personifiy your writing.

October 26, 2012

Social Skill or Good Qualification?

In the world today, nothing is more important than the quality of one's education, especially when it comes to jobs, personal opportunities and even the prosperity of a nation. However, as a qualified employee, decent education is not enough.

Undoubtly, businesses today will hire wherever highly-trained or high-skilled workers are located.A case in this point- is that over 60% of the new jobs in the coming decade will require more than a high school diploma. Furthermore, good qualifications which, in most cases, means a high level of beducation is increasingly a prerequisite for the success and a as well as a predictor of the income that a person will earn throughout her or his life. More importantly, it is exactly the skill you have learnt that defines your value to your employers.

However, it is an undeniable fact that social skills also play a critical role in personal fulfillment at work. For example, a salesman who has a Bachelor degree in marketing but not knowing how to get along with is customers will be outcompete.
edged out by competitors.

Especially, schools today are also required to include social skills education into their curriculum. By contrary, However ,teachers today, particularly in China , more tend to "teach to the test" but not the skill that would prepare them to for the a career. Thus, subjects like history and philosophy which can cultivate personal social awareness are squeezed out. (good usage here!)

In summing up, employees with a good qualifications or education background are important for companies to gain an edge in global market, but what speaks more to the long-term success to a business is the worker's social abilities.(interesting use of "speaks more" here!)

Bunse I can see that in general you have a good feel for expression. The use of little prepositions and articles like ---the, a ,for etc.. are giving you a hard time.
I wish I knew some execises that could help you- but I don't. Just keep writing and letting us correct and eventually you can get a feel for it. I know how difficult those little words are to use. It is hard to find the pattern.