Katerina
What are the advantages and disadvantages of becoming famous? Nowadays many people interested in the star life and desire to be a famous. It is widely believed that celebrities have a wonderful life with no worries or problems. But is being famous so easy? Some people are not aware of the fact that fame can bring either advantages or disadvantages. The main advantage of being famous is that you can make money very easily, using your image to publicize brands, as an example. In addition, celebrities get special treatment in almost every place they go and it is always a pleasure to feel that you are admired for someone. Although the possibility of being recognized for what you are or for something you did, can seem very appealing, it may also put you in some odd or uncomfortable situations. For instance, when you are trying to have a relaxing dinner with a friend on a restaurant, you might suddenly be interrupted for a hysterical fan or even for paparazzi. So, the celebrity’s private life is not secret anymore as being published by the media until the person has no peace. Everything is revealed by the media. In conclusion, I can say that well-known person’s life has a bright and a dark side. As far as I am concerned, not everyone will be able to cope with fame.
Jan 15, 2014 10:45 PM
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What are the advantages and disadvantages of becoming famous?

Nowadays many people are interested in the star life stardom and desire to be a famous. It is widely believed that celebrities have a wonderful life with no worries or problems. But is being famous so easy? Some people are not aware of the fact that fame can bring either both advantages or and disadvantages.
The main advantage of being famous is that you can make money very easily, using your image to publicize brands, as an for example. In addition, celebrities get special treatment in almost every place they go and it is always a pleasure to feel that you are admired for bysomeone.
Although the possibility of being recognized for what you are or for something you did, can seem very appealing, it may also put you in some odd or uncomfortable situations. For instance, when you are trying to have a relaxing dinner with a friend on in a restaurant, you might suddenly be interrupted for by a hysterical fan or even for paparazzi. So, the celebrity’s private life is not secret anymore as being it is published by the media until the person has no peace. Everything is revealed by the media.
In conclusion, I can say that a well-known person’s life has a bright and a dark side. As far as I am concerned, not everyone will be able to cope with fame.

 

<em>Mostly some problems with prepositions.  You have a good understanding of how to structure an essay. I would have like a little more support in your advantages paragraph. A nice job overall.</em>

January 15, 2014
I totally agree with you! :)
January 15, 2014
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