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The Sport Volleyball in Peru, Can you correct it The volleyball Sport in Peru To begin with, The volleyball is a team sport in which two teams of six players are separated by a net. Each team tries to score points by grounding a ball on the other team´s court under organized rules. The volleyball in Peru is divided into five stages The Origins, the era of Akira kato, the era of mambo park, The crisis era and the volleyball in this days. First, The origins The volleyball came to Perú in 1911, it was brought by two American teachers, responsible for educational reform and practicing it as a hobby, because in those years dominate the football and boxing. Second, the era of Akira kato. In 1965, the coach Akira kato arrived to Perú, as guest of the Peruvian volleyball Federation Is in this time, when Perú to get the continental recognition, because Perú to get to gain twelve of fifteen games. In this time, Perú won for first time to Brazil. The Peruvian players more important in this time were: Lucha Fuentes y Anace Carrillo. Third, the era of Mambo Park. 1982, Akira kato died in Lima, His replacement was the South Korean Mambo Park. Who had worked in the technical command of Akira in the Peruvian Team. The more important in this time, is when Perú participated in Seoul Olympics of 1988, this perhaps is the time of highest level of the peruavian team and is the highest point that failure to reach a popular sport in our country. The Peruvian players more important in this time were: Cecilia Tait, Cenaida Uribe, Gabriela Perez del Solar, Gina Torrealva y Rosa Garcia, among others like Natalia Malaga. Fourth, The Crisis Era. After the Olympics in 1988 , gradually the level of the Peruvian team down. The peruavian team lost many games, For example. In World China 1990 , Peruvian obtained sixth place, a distant position for those results years ago. In 1991 , Peru lost the South American final against Brazil. And In this time, The coach mambo park retired as several of the players. In 1999 , Park returned to the team, but the result did not change. Fith: The volleyball in this days. In this days the sport volleyball in Peru is recovering, because in this moment we have to Nalia Malaga like couch, and she is proving to be a stronger woman, she has a lot character an she is very careful, organized, disciplined and more. For that reason, we are waiting to come to be the winner like happened in Seul Olympics THE END.
Jan 26, 2014 7:36 PM
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March 2, 2015

The Sport of Volleyball in Peru, Can you correct it

The Sport of volleyball Sport in Peru
To begin with, The volleyball is a team sport in which two teams of six players are separated by a net. Each team tries to score points by grounding a ball on the other team´s court under organized rules.
The history of volleyball in Peru is divided into five periods (stages ok too): 
the Origins, the era of Akira kato, the era of mambo park, the crisis era and the volleyball in recent years
Origins
Volleyball came to Perú in 1911, it was brought by two American teachers, responsible for educational reform and who played it as a hobby, because in those years football and boxing dominated scholastic sports.
Era of Akira kato.
In 1965, Coach Akira kato arrived to Perú, as guest of the Peruvian volleyball Federation It was
 at this time when Perú got or obtained continental recognition, because Perú (it) won twelve of fifteen games. 
During this time, Perú beat Brazil for first time.
The most important Peruvian players in this time were: Lucha Fuentes and Anace Carrillo.
Era of Mambo Park.
1982, Akira kato died in Lima.  His replacement was the (or a) South Korean Mambo Park who had worked as an assistant to Akira on the Peruvian Team.
The most important in this time is when Perú participated in Seoul Olympics of 1988.  This event perhaps is the time of highest level of play of the peruavian team and is the highest point of popularity it reached as a popular sport in our country.
The Peruvian players most important in this time were: Cecilia Tait, Cenaida Uribe, Gabriela Perez del Solar, Gina Torrealva y Rosa Garcia, among others like Natalia Malaga.
The Crisis Era.
After the Olympics in 1988 , gradually the level of the Peruvian team play went down.
The Peruvian team lost many games. For example,
in World China 1990 , Peru finished in sixth place, a distant position compared to those results from years ago.
In 1991 , Peru lost the South American final against Brazil.
And at this time, Tthe coach mambo park retired as did several of the players.
In 1999 , Park returned to the team, but the results did not change.
Fifth: Volleyball in recent years.
In these days the sport of volleyball in Peru is recovering, because at this moment we have  Nalia Malaga as coach, and she is proving to be a strong woman. She has a lot character and she is very meticulous, organized, disciplined and more.
For that reason, we are waiting to come to become a winner again like we were at the Seoul Olympics
THE END.

me gusta jugar el "volleyball" pero soy demasiado viejo ahora

January 26, 2014
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