On a Harmonious Dormitory Life As a college student, dormitory life plays a significant role in our college life, which greatly affects us. In my view, dormitory is not only a place to live, but also

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On a Harmonious Dormitory Life As a college student, dormitory life plays a significant role in our college life, which greatly affects us. In my view, dormitory is not only a place to live, but also a warm home. A harmonious life brings us a sense of comfort. However, sometimes, there are some disharmony circumstances in the dormitory life. For example, we may often argue about who is responsible for the hygiene. In addition, our roommates' big noises which will affect others can also contribute to the disharmony dormitory life. It is necessary to keep the dormitory life harmonious. On the one hand, a harmonious dormitory life can promote the friendship between us. On the other hand, we can regain a good energy, which can motivate us to study. There are numerous ways to obtain a harmonious dormitory life, but I would like to explore some of the most important ones here. First of all, we should learn to be modest. Nowadays, parents always lavish too much care on their children, even when they make mistakes. Since we are living with contemporaries, we must learn to care for others' mood. More importantly, we should evaluate our life-style and try to get rid of your dirty habits, if there are any. What's more, when an annoying situation arises, we just have to learn to tolerate each other and co-exist. Furthermore, we should evaluate our life-style and try to get rid of your dirty habits, if there are any. Undoubtedly, we should communicate with each other more often. While we are communicating, we can know what others are thinking and find out a solution together. In conclusion, we should try our best to build a harmonious dormitory life for the sake of good study and good life.

Mar 19, 2014 7:07 AM

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On a Harmonious Dormitory Life

As a college student, dormitory life plays a significant role in our college life, which greatly affects us. In my view, the/a** dormitory is not only a place to live, but also a warm home. A harmonious life brings us a sense of comfort.
However, sometimes, there are some disharmony disharmonius circumstances in the** dormitory life. For example, we may often argue about who is responsible for the hygiene. In addition, our roommates' big loud noises which will affect others can also contribute to the disharmony of dormitory life.
It is necessary to keep the** dormitory life harmonious. On the one hand, a harmonious dormitory life can promote the** friendship between us. On the other hand, we can regain a good energy, which can motivate us to study.
There are numerous ways to obtain a harmonious dormitory life, but I would like to explore some of the most important ones here. First of all, we should learn to be modest. Nowadays, parents always lavish too much care on their children, even when they make mistakes. Since we are living with contemporaries*1, we must learn to care for others' moods. More importantly, we should evaluate our life-style and try to get rid of your dirty habits, if there are any. What's more, when an annoying situation arises, we just have to learn to tolerate each other and co-exist. Furthermore, we should evaluate our life-style and try to get rid of your dirty habits*2, if there are any. Undoubtedly, we should communicate with each other more often. While we are communicating, we can know what others are thinking and find out3* a solution together.
In conclusion, we should try our best to build a harmonious dormitory life for the sake of good study and good life.

1* Contempories referes to the same historical period. Maybe you mean - 'peers'

2* repeated

3* find out is more for information- find out the answer, find out who did it, find out what time the train leaves, etc. With 'a solution' the collocation is 'find a a solution'

** definate articles - specific countables - the dormitory is a place where we sleep.

specific uncountables - the friendship we have formed, the life we lead today.

no article - uncountables in general 'friendship is nice ', 'life is hard'

March 19, 2014

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