Is Childhood is the happiest time of a person's life?
People can live very happy days be happy all through all their life. Every cycle of life has own beauty and each cycle era differs from each other. Because in every period you have different age, notions and responsibilityies. So that The happiest time of a person's life is childhood.
When we are a child everything is perfect. In a child's world there are is no responsibility. You just play with your toys, with your family and your friends. There are very amazing dreams in your mind and you don't know anything about outside. B because your parents are your protector angels who always love you and you always need them. As well as being a child, there are both teenage and adult periods. When you start to grow up by the time , most of thing in your life start to change simultaneously. Firstly, man has social perception so that you need to communicate with other people who you haven't seen so far. You have more responsibility than you have had in your childhood and you make your decisions for on yourself. <em>Of course there are is your familiy but it does't change the reals that you are individual who aren't a kid</em>. [I don't understand your intended meaning here.] While you are a tenager or an adult, you can live be both happiness happy and sad sadness. For instance, sometimes because of passing you passed exam, you will be happy, sometimes because of arguing argued with your lover, you will be upset. Whereas there isn't exam or lover aren't exams or lovers when you are a child.
As a consequent concequence, you are happier than the other cycles at other times of your life, since every feeling is very basic for you like hunger, convenience, breaking down your toys or missing your mother. Apart from there are your dreams, which will be never felt similiar emotions as strongly again throughout your life.
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Hey Eda! Great piece; I agree. Childhood is awesome, just like your English! I have one small suggestion, however. The conjunctions 'since' and 'because' need to be used in the same sentence as the thing they refer to (either before or after). Happy study :)
Is childhood is the happiest time of a person's life ?
People can live very happily throughout all their entire lives. Each cycle of life has its own beauty and each cycle differs from each the others. This is because in every period (of your life) you have a different age, notions and responsibilities. For myself, I think that the happiest time of a person's life is childhood.
When we are children, everything is perfect. In a child's world there are no responsibilities. You just play with your toys, with your family and your friends. There are very amazing dreams in your mind and you don't know anything about life beyond that, because your parents are your protecting angels who always love you and you always need them. As well as being a child, there are also the periods of adolescence and adulthood. When you start to grow up and enter these periods by the time, most of things in your life start to change simultaneously. Firstly, man has you gain a sense of social perception because that you will need to communicate with other people who you haven't met yet. You have more responsibility than you had in your childhood and you make your decisions on yourself. Of course there are your family may still be with you, but that does't change the reality that you are an individual who aren't and not a kid anymore. While you are a teenager or an adult, you can experience both happiness and sadness. For instance, sometimes you may be happy due to passing your exams, and sometimes you may be upset because of an argument with your lover. In contrast, there are no exams or lovers when you are a child.
As a consequence, you are happier in childhood than in the other periods of your life, as every feeling is very basic for you, such as like hunger, convenience, breaking down your toys or missing your mother. Apart from these feelings, there are also your dreams which will be never felt similiar emotions as vividly throughout your life.
Even with the corrections, this is a little unwieldy as a final paragraph. You hadn't mentioned some of those feelings earlier, so it looks like you are adding new material at the end. Don't be afraid of a short conclusion or repeating a point, as long as it's appropriate.
Certain words such as <em>since</em>, <em>whereas</em> and <em>because</em> are only used in sentences which have two parts (ie. comparing two points in one sentence).
Best regards :) This is OK for ending a business letter, but it looks a little out-of-place here. How about, <em>Thanks in advance (for your corrections) </em>?
This is quite good, Eda. :) In some cases I offered a more suitable phrase, even though what you wrote was understandable.
