Nani
I love walking barefoot in the sand on the beach. I love walking barefoot in the sand on the beach, it's the first thing I do when I go to the beach. I take off my shoes, socks, I wake up my pants. Then I go to the shore and sink my feet in the sand and then start taking long steps. It's like a ritual because I always do the same. I also like walking on the beach and when I'm tired I sit somewhere on the beach and I contemplate the sea. Another thing I like to do when I go to the beach is lie in the sand without a towel and cover myself with sand, then I rub my body to remove the dead skin (I love do it) When I look like a croquette I run to the sea and bathe to remove all the sand. The skin is very soft after do that.. I can't do all that very often because I live far from the sea. We don't need to much to enjoy. I consider myself a happy person by nature, I know appreciate and enjoy the small pleasures of life.
Jun 21, 2014 7:18 PM
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I love walking barefoot in the sand on the beach.

I love walking barefoot in the sand on the beach, it's the first thing I do when I go to the beach. I take off my shoes, socks, I wake up my pants.

 

<em>Esto es como decir "Me despierto mi pantalones".  La correcta, "I take off my shoes, socks, and I take off my pants" o solo "I take off my shoes, socks AND my pants."</em>

 

Then I go to the shore and sink my feet in the sand and then start taking long steps. It's like a ritual because I always do the same <em>thing</em>

 

I also like walking on the beach and when I'm tired I sit somewhere on the beach and I contemplate stare at the sea.

 

<em>"stare at" porque "contemplate" es contemplar en español.  Tu no contemplas al mar.  Tú miras al mar.  </em>

Another thing I like to do when I go to the beach is lie in the sand without a towel and cover myself with sand, then I rub my body to remove the dead skin (I love do it)


<em>No estoy seguro qué estás intentando decir aquí, pero "remove the dead skin" es un malo frase aquí.  "dead skin" es la piel muerta y no creo que eliminas la piel muerta a la playa verdad? :/  </em>

 

When I look like a croquette I run to the sea and bathe to remove all the sand. The skin is very soft after I do that.. I can't do all that very often because I live far from the sea.

We don't need to do much to enjoy the beach.  I consider myself a happy person by nature, I know appreciate and enjoy the small pleasures of life.

 

<em>For the most part, you did very well.  Good job! :)  </em>

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<em>Lo siento si my correciones son malos.  Estoy aprendiendo Español.</em>

June 21, 2014

I love walking barefoot in the sand on the beach.

I love walking barefoot in the sand on the beach, it's the first time I do when I go to the beach. I take off my shoes, socks, I fold up my pants. Then I go to the shore and sink my feet in the sand and then start taking long steps. It's like a ritual because I always do the same. I also like walking on the beach and when I'm tired I sit somewhere on the beach and I contemplate the sea.

Another thing I like to do when I go to the beach is lie in the sand without a towel and cover myself with sand, then I rub my body to remove the dead skin (I love do it) When I look like a croquette I run to the sea and bathe to remove all the sand. The skin is very soft after do that.. I can't do all that very often because I live far from the sea.

We don't need to much to enjoy. I consider myself a happy person by nature, I know appreciate and enjoy the small pleasures of life.

July 8, 2014

I love walking barefoot in the sand on the beach.

I love walking barefoot in the sand on the beach, it's the first thing I do when I go to the beach. I take off my shoes and socks, I roll up my pants and then I go to the shore and sink my feet in the sand and start taking long steps. It's like a ritual because I always do the same thing. I also like walking on the beach and when I'm tired I sit somewhere on the beach and I contemplate the sea.

Another thing I like to do when I go to the beach is lie in the sand without a towel and cover myself with sand, then I rub my body to remove the dead skin (I love do it). When I look like a croquette I run to the sea and bathe to remove all the sand. My skin is very soft after I do that. Unfortunately, I can't do all of this very often because I live far from the sea.

We don't need to much to enjoy life. I consider myself a happy person by nature; I know, appreciate and enjoy the small pleasures of life.

June 29, 2014
so dramatic!
June 24, 2014
Hola James, ahora ya lo se, muchas gracias.
June 24, 2014
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