LIFE ON PLANET "ZUTOPIA"
Have you ever wondered if there is intelligent life on other planets and what life is like over there? I've just returned from an intergalactic voyage and all I can say is we are not alone!
About 1000 light years away from Earth, there is a planet called Zutopia, which has exactly the same atmospheric condition as Earth but the Zutopians could see stars, there was (they were?) awesome, at night the stars seem like "Las Vegas" or "NY" because Zutopia is well known as the planet that has never slept (never sleeps?) because their stars had (have) power, it isn't like a superman and their power, those stars had the power to clean all the planet with weird and awesome light, there (they?) haven't had an environmental problem until now.
Ours scientists had been studying this planet (if you mean that the scientists are still studying then you should use Present Perfect Continuous Tense, i. e. have been studying), and all their stars. I was a volunteer of NASA, Six astronauts and I went to Zutopia, we saw the stars and we tried to clone them but we could not because in the middle of the cloning (while cloning/ in the middle of the process of cloning), we had a big explosion and we destroyed a lot of stars, and we had to return to our planet...
To be continued...
LIFE ON THE PLANET "ZUTOPIA"
Have you ever wondered if there is intelligent life on other planets and what life must be like there? I've just returned from an intergalactic voyage and all I can say is we are not alone!
About 1,000 light years away from Earth, there is a planet called Zutopia, which has the exact same atmospheric conditions as Earth but the Zutopian could see the stars, there was awesome, at night the stars seems like "Las Vegas" or "NY" because Zutopia is well known like the planet that has never slept, because their stars had powers, it isn't like a superman and their powers, those stars had the power to clean all the planet with the weird and awesome light, there hadn't had an environmental problem until now. <em>[this is too long for one sentence, try to break it up]</em>
About 1,000 light years away from Earth, there is a planet called Zutopia, which has the exact same atmospheric conditions as Earth, the only difference being that the Zutopian is able to see the stars. They were awesome, at night they reminded one of Las Vegas or New York. In fact, Zutopia has been nicknamed 'the planet that never sleeps'. The stars around Zutopia have powers, not magic powers, but the ability to cleanse the planet with its weird and awesome light, and rid it of all environmental impurities. It is for this reason that there hasn't been a single environmental problem up to now.
Ours scientifics scientists had been studying this planet, and all their its stars, when I was a volunteer of at NASA,. Six astronauts and I, went traveled to Zutopia, we saw the stars and we tried to clone it <em>[what? the stars or the planet] </em>but we didn't can we were not able to/we were unsuccessful, because in the middle of the cloning, we had an set off a big explosion and we destroyed a lot of many stars, and so we had to return to our planet...
To be continued...
