About Richard Branson.
The P phrase, "Your call is very important for to us but at this moment all our operators are busy," only causes irritation and anger.
Customers of Virgin Atlantic hear this phrase: "Hello, my name is Richard Branson, . I'm the owner of Virgin Atlantic. In At this moment all our operators are busy. This That is no good.
Let's done like do this: if after 18 seconds nobody is has answered from your call, you will have a discount of 450 pounds. I will start the countdown - , 18, 17, 16, 15 ..."
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About Richard Branson.
The phrase, "Your call is very important to us but at the moment all our operators are busy," only causes irritation and anger.
Customers of Virgin Atlantic hear this phrase: "Hello, my name is Richard Brandson. I'm the owner of Virgin Atlantic. At this moment all our operators are busy. That is no good. Let's do this: if after 18 seconds nobody has answered your call, you will have a discount of 450 points. I will start the countdown, 18, 17, 16, 15, ..."
The customer is listening and passionately hopes for only one thing, that the operator will not answer.
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Please do not worry that I made so many corrections. Your English is good, and your meaning was very clear.
Try to use common punctuation characters such as a comma (,) and a full stop (.), rather than a colon (:) or a dash (–).
About Richard Branson.
The phrase "Your call is very important for us but at this moment all our operators are busy" only causes irritation and anger.
Customers of Virgin Atlantic hear this phrase: "Hello, my name is Richard Branson, I'm the owner of Virgin Atlantic. In this moment all operators are busy. This is no good.
Let's done like this: if after 18 seconds nobody is has answered from your call you will have receive a discount of 450 pounds. I shall start countdown - 18, 17, 16, 15 ..."
The customer is listening and passionately dreams hopes for only one thing - that operator will not lift the handset in time.
Фраза «Ваш звонок очень важен для нас, но в настоящий момент все операторы заняты» вызывает лишь раздражение и гнев.
Вот, что слышат клиенты авиакомпании Virgin Atlantic:
«Здравствуйте, меня зовут Ричард Брэнсон, я владелец авиакомпании Virgin Atlantic. Сейчас все операторы заняты. Это непорядок. Давайте поступим следующим образом: если через 18 секунд никто не ответит на ваш звонок, вы получите скидку 450 фунтов. Я начинаю обратный отсчет — 18, 17, 16, 15...»
Клиент слушает и страстно мечтает только об одном — чтобы оператор не снял трубку.
[I cannot comment on the Russian version, I do not yet remember the alphabet!]
I have always admired that RB did things in a different way, and he made customers feel valued!
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