Krystal
I want to talk English with someone who want to learn Vietnamese. Now, it's 11:48 pm. I often sleep and get up too late. I really want to fix this habit. I'll talk for you what reason makes me resolving learning English that is a story. 8months ago, my older sister's friend invited her for her friend's wedding. My sister just have a baby, so I on behalf her, participate that wedding. Wedding was held her country, it's so far from Ho Chi Minh city (I live in here). So, we go by car having 52 seats (I don't know in English, they call it is what). And I'm very sock, because all people in car that is America. And my English is very very bad! In 4 hours, I just only quiet, quiet and quiet. I want to sleep but I can't because they play music very noisy and they were held party in this car. We sleep over that night at hotel. Tomorrow is beginning wedding party. Although someone is teacher, they speak Vietnamese not bad. But they always talk English and I can't understand something. Feeling so embrassing and discomfortable. When the party finish, I wait car coming with a man. He start getting acquanted with me. We talk some simple sentences, then I feel I can't say anymore by English, I ask him that can he talk Vietnamese. He's polite, he understand my english is bad bad, so he try talk Vietnamese with me. We talk together until car comes. When I come back home, I feel happy and amazing because I can talk with foiregner, although it's very little. I talk with myself that must learn english more. This is reason I participate italki. Now I should sleep. If you correct for me, I so hope that you can explain every correct, please. Thank you and good night! ^^~ Bây gìơ là 11:48 tối.Tôi thường ngủ và thức dậy rất muộn. Tôi thực sự muốn sưả thói quen này. Tôi sẽ kể cho bạn nghe lý do gì làm tôi muốn học tiếng anh, đó là cả một câu chuyện. 8 tháng trước, bạn của chị gái tôi mời chị ấy đến dự đám cưới của bạn chị ấy. Chị gái tôi vừa mới có con nên tôi thay mặt đi dự đám cưới. Đám cưới được tổ chức ở quê của cô ấy, nó rất xa so với thành phố Hồ Chí Minh (tôi đang sống ở đây). Vì vậy chúng tôi đi bằng xe 52 chỗ (Tôi không biết tiếng anh họ gọi là gì). Tôi rất sốc khi toàn bộ người trên xe đều là người Mỹ. Và tiếng anh của tôi thì rất rất tệ! Trong 4 gìơ đồng hồ, tôi chỉ im lặng, im lặng và im lặng. Tôi không thể ngủ vì họ chơi nhạc rất ồn và tổ chức tiệc tùng trên xe luôn.
Apr 6, 2015 5:48 PM
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I want to talk English with someone who want to learn Vietnamese.

Now, it's 11:48 pm. I often sleep and get up too late. I really want to fix this habit. I'll tell you my reason for wanting to learn English, there is a story. I'll talk for you what reason makes me resolving learning English that is a story. 8 months ago, my older sister's friend invited her for to her friend's wedding. My sister just had have a baby, so I on behalf of her, participated in that wedding. The wedding was held in her country (or, in the countryside), it's so far from Ho Chi Minh city (I live in here). So, we go by car having 52 seats (a bus?) (I don't know in English, they call it is what). And I'm very sock (shocked?) because all the people in the bus car that is are American. And my English is very very bad! In 4 hours, I just was only quiet, quiet and quiet (or, in 4 hours, I had not spoken a word - that is idiomatic English!) . I wanted to sleep but I can't because they played their music very loudnoisy and they were holding a held party in this car. We sleep slept over that night at in a hotel. The day after Tomorrow began the is beginning wedding party. Although someone there is teacher, their they speak Vietnamese is not bad. But they always talk in English and I can't understand some things. I feltFeeling so embrassed and discomfortable uncomfortable. When the party finished, I waited for the bus wait car coming with a man. He start getting acquanted aquainted with me. We talk using some simple sentences, then I feel I can't say anymore by in English, I ask him could that cant he talk Vietnamese. He's polite, he understandthat my english is bad bad, so he tries to talk Vietnamese with me. We talk together until the bus car comes. When I come back home, I feel happy and amazing because I can talk with a foiregner, although only a it's very little. I tell talk with myself that I must learn english more. This is the reason why I participate in italki. Now I should sleep. If you correct for me, I so hope that you can explain every correction, please. Thank you and good night! ^^~ 

Bây gìơ là 11:48 tối.Tôi thường ngủ và thức dậy rất muộn. Tôi thực sự muốn sưả thói quen này. Tôi sẽ kể cho bạn nghe lý do gì làm tôi muốn học tiếng anh, đó là cả một câu chuyện. 8 tháng trước, bạn của chị gái tôi mời chị ấy đến dự đám cưới của bạn chị ấy. Chị gái tôi vừa mới có con nên tôi thay mặt đi dự đám cưới. Đám cưới được tổ chức ở quê của cô ấy, nó rất xa so với thành phố Hồ Chí Minh (tôi đang sống ở đây). Vì vậy chúng tôi đi bằng xe 52 chỗ (Tôi không biết tiếng anh họ gọi là gì). Tôi rất sốc khi toàn bộ người trên xe đều là người Mỹ. Và tiếng anh của tôi thì rất rất tệ! Trong 4 gìơ đồng hồ, tôi chỉ im lặng, im lặng và im lặng. Tôi không thể ngủ vì họ chơi nhạc rất ồn và tổ chức tiệc tùng trên xe luôn.

April 6, 2015
@Mudassar: Thank you so much, I really want to chat english with everyone. Nice to meet you! :)
April 7, 2015
I can help you if you prefer
April 7, 2015
@YGS: Thank you so much, because you read it. :)
April 7, 2015
Hello ... By the way nice story.. We are I same boat. I also want to speak write listen and read. Italki provide u everything so you can learn .... We should follow a rule .. Learn and return.. Return what.you leant... Italki is great platform ..good night ...
April 6, 2015
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