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Topic : The benefits of learning English English is an international language in the world. Most people are using this language on the daily life. And learning English is very essential for people because of many benefits it brings. Firstly, It is an important language because we use this language to communication with other country's people. We also use English in many places. For example, it is used in the international business, computer language, movies, and so on. Secondly, we can communicate with people all over the world so that we can understand each other very well. Also,We can understand their cultures . Finally, English give you many chance to have a good job. There are many foreign companies and domestic companies which require employee’s English skill. If you can speak English, you will have more opportunities . In short, learning English is really important to us in the modern world. Thus, we should learn English as much as possible.
May 20, 2015 9:47 AM
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Topic : The benefits of learning English

English is an international language in throughout the world. Most people are useing this language on in their daily life. And Learning English is very essential for people, because of the (many) benefits it brings. Firstly, it is an important language because we use this language toin communication with people from other countries people. We also use English in many places situations. For example, it is used in the international business, computer language, movies, and so on. Secondly, we can communicate with people all over the world, so that we can understand each other (very) well, Also, and we can also understand their cultures . Finally, English gives* you many a better chance of to have a good job. There are many foreign companies and domestic companies which require an employee’s English skill*. If you can speak English, you will have more opportunities . In short, learning English is really important to us in the modern world,. Thus, so we should learn English as much as possible.

*to communicate with people  <em>or</em>  in (our) communication(s) with people

*offers, provides you with more opportunity for a good job

* <em>or</em>  'which require an employee to have/possess English skills'

May 21, 2015
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