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Some people consider computers to be more of a hindrance than a help. It is undeniable that since computer has been advanced in 19th century,it brings tremendous help to human-being,such save and calculate the huge number of data daily.But at the same time,some people believe that computer have more negative that greatly effect in their life.Personally,I agree with that statement and will extent my own opinion in this essay. The first reason to support this argument is that modern people are over reply on "computer's lifestyle' and seems have forget how to be a basic human-being without computer.For example,Children.especially the new generations,spend more time in playing computer games instead outdoor activities and this phenomenon also cause problems for young children 's health conditions;There is a recent evidence shows that since the first time when computer show up in the world, children's myopia rate has boosted dramatically. Moreover,people utilize computer to save their private informations like banking account numbers, original design ideals and finance status of company,which can be a great risk because when computer access to the internet, it gives criminals the opportunity to invade and steal those important properties. On the other hand, computer indeed makes mankind's life much more easier.For instance, withe-color uses computer to save and deal with the astronomical dates daily.By searching informations and ideals via computer,students can finish their assignments efficiently. Nowadays,scientists are even set a program in this "high-intelligent' device to control a robot to do the impossible tasks like detach a bomb. To sum up,though computer have a vast number of advantages,I personally consider that people should not ignore the drawbacks it existing.Over computerization might lead their owner end up in tragedy.
May 20, 2015 1:53 PM
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Some people consider computers to be more of a hindrance than a help.

It is undeniable that since computer has been advanced in 19th century, it brings tremendous help to human-beings, such save and calculate the huge number of data daily. But at the same time, some people believe that computers have more negatives/negative aspects that greatly effect in their life. Personally, I agree with that statement and will extent my own opinion in this essay.

The first reason to support this argument is that modern people are over reply on "computer's lifestyle' and seems to have forgetten how to be a basic human-being without a computer. For example: Children - especially the newer generations, spend more time playing computer games instead outdoor activities and this phenomenon also causes problems for young children's health conditions; There is a recent evidence shows that since the first time when computer show up in the world, children's myopia rate has boosted dramatically(or: There is a recent discovery that shows evidence that children's myopia rates boosted dramatically around the time computers showed up). Moreover, people utilize computers to save their private information like banking account numbers, original design ideals and finance statuses of companies which can be a great risk because when computers gain access to the internet, it gives criminals the opportunity to invade and steal those important properties.

On the other hand, computers indeed make mankind's life much easier. For instance, withe-color uses computer to save and deal with the astronomical dates daily. By searching for information and ideals via computer, students can finish their assignments efficiently. Nowadays, scientists even set a program in this "highly-intelligent' device to control a robot to do impossible tasks like detach a bomb.

To sum up, though computers have a vast number of advantages, I personally consider that people should not ignore the existing drawbacks. Over-computerization might lead their owner end up in tragedy.

May 21, 2015
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