Iris Mckay
A frozen Winter Morning -- a poem The temperature is -13 F today here. It has been snowing for almost a week. When I got up this morning, it was very beautiful and cold outside. Touched by the serenity of nature, I wrote a short poem. A frozen winter morning Chilly cold and quiet No motion No talking Even the magpie perches still
Dec 17, 2016 6:31 PM
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Thanks @ZhangtheGreat and @bluebottle for your kind words about my poem. May you have a warm relaxing weekend there.
December 17, 2016
Lovely poem. Thanks. And thanks for the lovely bleak wintry picture, too.
December 17, 2016
There's nothing to correct. This is brilliant! =)
December 17, 2016
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